keep going

yeah...um...its fine...but if u want us 2 b suspecious make the story look or BE longer, just a word of advice. u might wanna take it. other wise keep it up i wanna read sum more exciten stuff!

YEAH! I was hoping someone would write a continuation. (Long live Orlando!) Make sure you develope the characters a little while trying to keep them true to their movie-parts. Chapters, of course, need to be a bit long. Don't forget about the roles of the women in that time. Remember that they must grieve a bit (in their own special ways) for whoever they lost. And you have the young man who got the Sword of Troy from Paris. He could be a valueable character. Just make it great!

Great Story

hey, write more. this was short and sweet and definetly has me begging for more!

oH! Write more now please! Everybody should do troy fics I have decided

An excellent beginning, I too wondered what happened to Paris, Helen, Andromache, and Aeneas (founder of Rome) after they fled Troy. Please continue, I hope there's some romance between Paris *swoon* and Helen.

And then...?

pleaz write more!
i still have to go see this movie and i really wanna go!
stupid parents!
i dont no...
i luv paris hes mine!
i also have 91% chance of marrying ob...
So he MINE! mwahahahahahahhahahahaah!
i g2g c this movie!
Leggyelfgrl

yay, coolio so far, but you have to update PH soon, cause we all luv the story. chow, twilight