very good. melissa has a crush on Ray i believe? well, if they break up because of her, i will murder u!

i love ray/mariah stories! i only just realised they were here when u'r sister mentioned it in her profile.

well, excellent chapter. write more quickly!

Good story! No... Great story PLZ. contiue

This story is preety good so far.Keep it up! Oh and I think Mariah's last name is Chou.

im surprised wit all dis hmw i found time to read! :D anywho ya...ok...if we we were still writing that story we were going to write i would so badly want to describe that snobby girl. shes awseome! lol jks...ya shes gay and snobby and rdiculous. dont let her have rey plaese! anyways good stuff ma friend! ure way betta than me :( later man

ZAPS

mkai...

I'm the talented writer? You are! Sheesh...and how old were you?! Cause you were young, and my chapters are like now! And you wrote even better when you were younger...anyways, you missed a lot at school, stupid OELC...why I ought to...

And for your late birthday gift, you're gonna lo it!

God Job! And keep up the good work!

Preity

Hi. I really like this story. Most likely because Ray/Rei is my favorite character! W00T for neko-jins! update soon k? Coolio!

Mkai...so you know I was all like you know what eva and den dey were all like you know wat eva and den i was like yo mom and den dey were like oh no you didn't and I was all like oh yes I did mkai?...And it goes on and on forever...

Okies...i liked it...how old were u when u wrote it? 'Cause like this chappie is very very short for someone like you, anyways, keep updating please!

Preity

Yo!
Obviously its going to be a normal review:
"Hey! Great Job! I really liked it! Update Soon!"

Right? Anyways, I'll read the three next chappies...soon...mkai? lol anywho, good job!

So Proud! ^_^
PreityZ

UPDATE PLZ!

That Melissa can't take Ray. She's too stuck-up. I hate those type of people and girly-girls. I'm okay with wearing pink, but you'll never see me in a dress. It's sounding wonderful and I want Lee to call Mariah saying he's going insane and don't forget a match with Mariah and Melissa. Forgive me for being so pushy. Love the story. Update soon.

I think your story is completely awsome. Mariah's lat name is Wong by the way. And if its not to much trouble next time you right a story I have a request for it to be a Mariah and Mystel story. I have been waiting for a story like that ever since I saw Mystel on Beyblade.

Thanks for readin my review.

great story so far it needs way more mariah/ray though and im preety sure mariahs last name is chan! sorry if im wrong if i am blame linxau (offical blading information beyblades) xD LOL

c ya mountain galux,Ayane Ayanami!

eww! i haven't even meet the cousin and she seems annouying. If she's anything like Lina i'll flip anyways plz update its getting interesting... as long as Ray and Mariah stay together im happy!

plz continue writing plz! I'll die if you don't!

'Dunno what Mariah's last name is, but if there is one thing I do know, it is that this fanfic is teriffic! You better update soon!