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Vanpi
2005-04-11
ch 1,
abuseI'd like to say that I think this is very well writin. ^-^

Other then that, I stumbled across your penname on here due to the story Fearful Vamp. I was just looking around to see if there were any more chapters of it posted other then chapter eight if your the one that wrote it? I hope you are. ~-~ I just have to say I like the story and if you did right it and theres more then eight chapters to it then do you think you could send it to me. My email address is chainedinslavedmin@ THanks. ^-^
Wandering Cat
2004-09-18
ch 1,
abuseI thought I sent a review earlier. Hm. It never showed up. Oh well. Freakin' thing. Well, here's basically what I said(unless I dreamed reviewing this).

Poor Rath. Why would Sacaens be so cruel to him? If only they knew that he would one day save their butts. Hmm...Rath would get along pretty well with Kent, wouldn't he?. Y'know, this goes along with Rath and Lyn's A support quite well-

RATH: At the time I was less than four, without even the means to survive. I wandered, not knowing right from left, ...The people of other tribes laughed and ridiculed me.
LYNDIS: ... ...
RATH: I do not feel the loneliness now as I did then... but sometimes, I remember. I have never felt so alone.
LYNDIS: I see... That makes sense. When I first met you, I felt like we had something in common... Maybe it was because we shared the experience of being alone.
Lyn/Rath forever! Anyway, you did a very good job, big friggin' deal if it's short, go on and write more! Congrats to you!
Wandering Cat
2004-09-14
ch 1,
abuseAw...Poor Rath. I just love him *mentally hugs scowling chibi Rath* and you wrote this so well. It reminded on this one part from Rath and Lyn's A support (Rath/Lyn forever!)

RATH: At the time I was less than four, without even the means to survive. I wandered, not knowing right from left, ...The people of other tribes laughed and ridiculed me.
LYNDIS: ... ...
RATH: I do not feel the loneliness now as I did then... but sometimes, I remember. I have never felt so alone.
LYNDIS: I see... That makes sense. When I first met you, I felt like we had something in common... Maybe it was because we shared the experience of being alone.

Poor Rath, again. Ya know, Rath does seem like he'd get along pretty well with Kent. He would with Lyn, too, and PRETTY MUCH EVERYONE seems to agree that he loves Lyn, BUT she's always with someone else. (That was my Rath/Lyn rant for today. I'm obsessed). Go write more (although this is probably pretty old by now. I found in via search thingy)! Onto the favorites list!
Houyoku
2004-05-18
ch 1,
abuse*waves flags* Yay! A Rath fic ^__^ You don't see many of them around, which is somewhat depressing because he's such a great character..
I'm in the middle of writing a Rath fanfic, but it's somewhat different from your interpretation. But it actually goes into depth unlike how I portray it, I like it ^_^ It's short, but it's good, and that's all that matters, right? Kudos for you ^__^
~Becki
Rockies
2004-05-18
ch 1,
abuseAw, poor Rath! ;_; But wouldn't Lyn be able to relate somewhat, considering that her whole tribe was wiped out?
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