 zara2148 2009-11-28 . chapter 11Oh wow, is this story amazing!
Looking forward to how you handle Negaduck and NegaGosalyn! *crosses fingers* And here's hoping you update soon! |
 Twilight's-Mystery 2009-10-29 . chapter 11Oh you cruel cruel person, ending one of the best stories I've read in a while there and not continuing it for almost a year.
You really should be cool and all and continue it. I've read part of this story before, but I could swear there was more to it... *frowns slightly* guess I was wrong... *sulks*
I'm looking forward to more if you ever write, but just know I think it's great! Take care! |
 Spirit Rose 2009-08-16 . chapter 1Intresting story! Glad to see someone wrote a story about nega Gosalyn and nega Duck! Not much fanfiction of those two,It shame
Thank you for writing story about them! ^^ |
 Ghoulash 2009-07-22 . chapter 11I've found this story really engaging. Maybe the best Darkwing fanfic I've read yet. If it's ever continued I'll be comin' round to check things out. On another note I wanted to read that Unforgiving Past story but couldn't find it anywhere. |
 sakura himura 2009-04-03 . chapter 11great fic!
i´ll be waiting for the next chap!! |
 catincanada 2009-04-02 . chapter 11Great story. I sure hope Gos doesn't wind up in Negaducks clutches now that she's run away. |
 The Illustrious Crackpot 2009-01-14 . chapter 11Lovely use of language here; everything's sad, sweet and angsty, all at the same time. My only critique is that the idea of "Maybe Darkwing's trying to replace me with Angie" is a little too pronounced in the chapter...it might have been a bit more effective to subtly introduce that concept through the actions (by the constant comparisons between the two girls, etc.) and only put it into words at the end of the chapter, during Gosalyn's inner monologue. Either way, though, it's still great. |
 alesi257 2009-01-06 . chapter 11Great chapter once again, I can't wait for more. There's a detail that troubles me though, Darkwing registered Angie to school and I don't really understand how that would be possible. Angie doesn't have any papers, birth certificate or anything, I mean Darkwing is not her father or legal guardian and I don't think a public school would just agree to register a so-called "distant cousin hanging out with us for a few months". I hadn't thought of that before because Angie had just arrived to Avian Way, but in this chapter she's been staying for at least a few weeks and it sounds like Darkwing intends to adopt her so he surely must have taken some steps for the legal issues. Of course vis-à-vis the story it's a very minor problem, and nothing's impossible for Darkwing, besides since he works with SHUSH he can probably procure himself some fake legal documents to account for Angie's existence. |
 puppylove226959 2009-01-01 . chapter 11Love this.keep updating :) |
 Patricia de Lioncourt 2008-11-15 . chapter 11I can't wait to see what happens next! I love this story! Will DW's Gos run to Negaduck? Oh, I can't wait! Great chapter! |
 GreenLeoFiend 2008-11-11 . chapter 11Well it is not like I started "A Christmas Peril" three years ago, right? LOL It's cool, and what a great update. Gosalyn and Angie both reacting in believable ways, and Drake being Drake. The loving yet clueless father. Who needs to talk to Gosalyn. Of course he loves her, and of course Angie needs a home. It's not Angie's fault and all, nor is it Gosalyn's. But Drake needs to reassure both daughters. I guess the logic though might in Drake's eyes that he did do during the day. Though, I am sure, dangers will come when Angie gets recognized? Hmm...oh the drama! Looking forward to more. |
 NeoNix 2008-11-11 . chapter 11I'm sure I don't need to tell you again how much I'm loving this story! ^_^ And poor poor Gos and Nega-Gos, I can see how both Ducklings must feel. I hope you can update this soon again because now I'm even more curious! :D
Angie with DW when Negs is on the prowl looking for revenge? Ohh dear! Seriously you cannot keep me waiting too long or I may eat my own head in anticipation, you have been warned! XD |
 LuckyDuck29 2008-11-11 . chapter 11I love your analyses. I always thought it would be fun to have a twin, but not a complete opposite. Poor Gosalyn, but poor Angie too! I mean, she goes from one world to the other and then she has to contend with Gosalyns insecurity. But Gos's insecurity is perfectly understandable, though, and keeps being fueled by well-meaning but wrong-thinking people.
I was really happy to see Honker talk back to Tank! |
 Anna McNarin 2008-11-10 . chapter 11I'm so thrilled you updated. :D Just major "yay!" |
 LADYMALLARD 2008-11-10 . chapter 11Hi there, boy this has been a long time coming and well worth the wait. I am very pleased, that your now continuing this story. I really thought you caught the tenson between the two Gos's. I really do feel for Gos, in her turmoil concerning Angie, with her double being so opposite, Gos's insequrities are running rampant. Then to see Angie, in the Ratcatcher with Darkwing, can you say("Her worst nightmare!")I know that Drake, was only trying to make up, for Tank's bad behaviour and cheer up Angie, but I'm also sure, that in doing so, he has made Gos sure, he really does want her negaverse twin, instead of her. Drake will have alot of making up to do, once he finds out how upset, his daughter really is. I hope he's able to accomplish this task. I just hope that NegaDuck doesn't re-enter, the picture at this point in time, with Gos so upset at both her father and her twin, she might do something everyone will regret, like turning over her twin to NegaDuck, or causing Darkwing to fall into a trap, set by his evil counterpart. I egarly await the next chapter. Fantastic Job so far. Keep it up. |
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