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allyg1990 12/29/08 . chapter 1
Ooh, me likey! :)
Jade 9/29/05 . chapter 1
I really really liked it! I think you surprised the real Rogue...alone, scared even skeptical.
stormcloud-23 9/29/05 . chapter 1
That was a great poem! I loved it !
Eileen Blazer 10/24/04 . chapter 1
*SIGH* Remy could use ME all he wants. I wouldn't mind!

Your little poems are so much fun! Poor Rogue, but if you're gonna get used by someone, at least it's Remy! I'm sure that thought SO much comfort to her, right? Oh well. I'M happy, 'cause this was a great poem. Quite cool. :)
PlushKhaki13 8/14/04 . chapter 1
if you can't remember my pen name then try forcing it into your brain. anyway, about the poem (rEeZ) *mumble mumble* it's... ok, i guess. when did you write this? during class? *glares* you evil, evil girl.
paradigm se7en 7/27/04 . chapter 1
*whistle*

quite liked this one, actually. :)

and the closing three lines - just plain gorgeous.

cheers, love.

para
Ludi 5/20/04 . chapter 1
Nice form. I like the inconsistent rhyming scheme it works well here, and the imagery of the devil is very appropriate for me darling Rems. ;) I think this illustrates really well the indecision and confusion Rogue has so often felt towards their relationship - that sometimes their chemistry and the attraction between them is so strong that she could so easily lose control, and I think that's something that she hates. I think with Rogue it's important to her that their relationship isn't based purely on the physical, and that in her mind she must have often wondered whether what they had wasn't just some crazy attraction and nothing more. And I like the idea of created of it being battle that she constantly has to fight in order not to succumb to her charms - the girl has way too much pride. But you can understand her psychology- that after being unable to have a proper relationship for so long, she'd want to be certain that what she has is true love and nothing less.
Anywho, I'm going off into weird psychological tangents here. Heh, that's what your poem's done to me! Oh, and just to say that I like the analogy with the cards that he throws away. Reminds me of that rooftop scene. Anyway, it's a great way to end the poem. Lovely work.
And I'll just go now before I rant any more... ;)
iLoVeLoGaN 5/20/04 . chapter 1
OH that was so good.
Sienf 5/20/04 . chapter 1
It's... it's... oh, well, no need to fight it - it's melancholic, absorbing... omg... I liked the card-Rogue relationship...
Away.
omg it's... gr8...
ishandahalf 5/18/04 . chapter 1
yay, a poem! usually i'm not one for poetry (i think it's charm has diminished since we spent a month picking apart t.s. eliot, but that's not the point!), but this was good stuff. as is ALL of your stuff. which you should keep coming! quick like a buny on crack.
Weapon X 61 5/18/04 . chapter 1
Really Reall good
I'm not for poems but i liked it
childrenwithblades 5/18/04 . chapter 1
At least you bothered to put the poem in Poetry Form. Pretty sweet poem, but since Rogue is untouchable, as you've mentioned in "grasphing my untouchable hand", how can Gambit kiss her?
Or maybe I don't really read Romy much, that's why I've lost track to some ways in which Remy can touch Rogue. O_o
I liked the "demon in disguise" touch.
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