I'm afraid you have mischaracterized my good friends Blanche and John, sir.

Ah ha! It wasn't me at all, it was Miss Scarlet! A strange, strange story..!

I'm not sure I followed the point of your story. Some of the things in it were so random that they were more jarring than funny. Maybe if the story was longer and not so much was jam-packed into one small scene, it would make more sense. Just a suggestion.

RainShadow2005

the hell?

This was by far one the STRANGEST clue stories I have ever read. Some of the most random and pointless plot twists I have ever read occured in very short periods of time in the story and the story did not seem at all true to the characters. I'm sorry, but you truly need to work on plot development skills.

I'm sorry , but this REALLY needs work.I'm aorry , but it just needs...something.Update soon,it might get better as time goes on.B/t/w,have you ever seen the movie?

I'm sorry to say this but . . . it wasn't very good . . . sorry. I thought that the truth was better than a lie. It is very weird and doesn't make much sense, but everyone be looking forward for a story written by me and another here a fanfiction about Clue, I am the one who requested the subject, good luck on your future writing.

i felt sorry for you, so i read the story, and it was pretty good, keep writin Sam in pants.