The only thing that I can think about to say regarding this fic is that it is PHENOMENAL. It left me totally speechless and breathless. Your writing style, dialogue, essence, and plot are way beyond comparison, and I wish that there were more PMK fics of this caliber. You have kept original characters in character, but also given them your own special flavor, and the OC are just as well portrayed. Brava, brava, brava.

I know that it has been a few years since an update, but I hope that you sometime or another(very soon?!?!) consider coming back to this. I know that Life has a way of intruding on things and unfortunately we have to put some things on hold. Please come back to us someday, but until then I wish you only the best.

Thanks for all your hard work and talent- this was the most enjoyable read that I've had in quite some time.

Regards,
~I~

poor Souji..

T-T So sad... But I like the story! Nice plot so far. Keeps me guessing, and sorry I haven't reviewed before. I just though it pointless to review on chapters that have been up for awhile or isn't the last chapter. I like knowing whats happened up till the last chapter thats up before reviewing. I know thats weird and I should review right away and all but thats the way I am! I'm rambling... ^_^' sorry

HI THIS STORY AND CHAPTER WAS AWESOME AND I LIKED IT VERY MUCH. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I CAN'T WAIT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. BYE UNTIL NEXT TIME PLEASE UPDATE THANK YOU.

I think I might have to stab you! *cries* Why did you let it end like this? *attempts to strangle author* WHY?! It is so good and you are EVIL!

Is it complete? That is the main thing I want it to know. If it is - I will accept it as it is and not commint seppuku. LOL

just out of curiousity are you going to finish this story? cuz i'm kinda hooked onto it now... T_T... poor souji... T_T... anyways if u do plan on continuing plz update soon =)

This is my favorite chapter! and Hijikata was...ek.

This chapter rocked my socks off! So far this is one of the best fanfiction stories I have ever read! I loved how in this chapter you let Okita and Jarenna get to know each other, many stories don't do that.

ok, i'm not even halfway through the first chapter, and i already thought i should review! wow, this is the best shinsengumi story i have read yet!

Man! This story rocks! Why hasn't it been updated in 2 years?!?! I lurve this! I know its hard to keep a fanfiction going but this is one of the only god PMK fics I've found...imma cry, its so good but its been left unfinished! If you could find it in yourself, please continue it! Btw I loved the piggy's pov! XD

I really really like your story and I would be really really happy if you choose to continue it. PLEASE update SOON!

I really like this story, Okita-san is one of my favorite characters, and I'm an avid fan of the bakamatsu. (This shows from my RK obsession and my reading of Kaze Hikaru) Althought i've never seen or read PMK I really want to, and I was glad that your story was written so that I could catch up on what was happening. I aggree with your thoughts at the end of this chapter concerning Jarenna, she is a bit of a coward..sigh. Poor okita-san! Kimiko is a biatch, I just can't stand her lol. I hope that our 2 lovers will get back 2gether, and that you don't have Okita die of his TB thought that may be inevitable.

Please update soon, i'm really enjoying this fic.

Awesome fic. I really like how you've portrayed Hijikata-san. *bows* I hope you finish this story, I'd really like to see how it ends.

This is one great fanfic!! I love how you potrayed Souji in this fic and I really like Jarenna too.. I think she's a great person deep inside altho she did kept running away from the problems.. I would love to see more of this fic.. Please continue for the sake of me! Mucho love.. -sanzo_reload-

I know that you haven't updated in a long while...(1 year to be exact), but please update! You can't end a story like this! I'm almost crying! It's too sad! you have to make it have a happier ending! PLEASE!