it was well written. and i didn't find any kind of mistakes. you've got potential,kid. especially if you are the poetic type. because i am a poetry buff myself. not that i can write any but i enjoy reading poetry.

great... kawaii de... ^_^

AW...How cute...WILL YOU MAKE ANOTHER ONE?By the way I have seen your artwork and you are pretty talented.And your FAN-fiction was FANtasic.

I really like the way he thinks it's like "betraying Kuina's memory". That just seems like something he'd think...

What a nice monologue. It's short, but to the point and incredibly effective. :)

touching. Tashigi's and Zoro's point of views are interestingly amusing and faithful to their characters.

Cool! Sorry, just another avid ZxT supporter out here! That's really cool! Please write more, or really, write another thing (if this is one-shot)!

Really liked it! Hope you turn this into a real fic later.

Cute. ^^ I also like Zoro/Tashigi... and there is so little. ;_; Anyway, I liked it!

Ah~! I love this. Zoro's thoughts are extremely well-done, I think. It's hard to write ZoroxTashigi because they don't see each other much, so all they can do is think of each other...and you pull that off well. Short, but very nice.

Hey honen, I have to admit this was a pretty good story. You have an amazing ability to play around with words. I want to start doing that to as soon as I have some free time. I'll try to said them to U but I'll probably won't have much luck, my computer is so stubborn. Oh well I'll try sending them to you some how.

Sincerely
Tea