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Psycho Demon Creature 2006-08-07 . chapter 1
I'm not a sentimental person, not much can touch me and make me want to cry. I didn't cry for this, but I sure as hell was close to. I'm half asleep on this end of CA and it doesnt help when you slept till Noon that day anyway. But here's what I'm getting at, the story almost made me cry so it should make other's because it is a truely touching story. You should write tragedy and sorrow like this more often. Oh, and the line about the hotdog's made me laugh.^^

~Insane One
Jayliyah 2005-12-06 . chapter 1
Aw... this was beautiful. *sniff* It's always hard describing painful emotions especially when it comes to Squall but you always manage to do it, and well, I might add. This was another song that fitted quite well and it was just wonderfully written! Loved it.
Almasy11 2004-12-05 . chapter 1
Wow... Very emotional, very dramatic. Nearly flawless. As with everything else you write, it's almost as if I'm there when I read it. Great story!
The Angel of the Lion 2004-10-13 . chapter 1
This was a wonderful piece of writing. It was so moving. I've been around on for a while, so I'll be catching up on reviewing your other fics too.
xSummonerYunax 2004-06-21 . chapter 1
That was beautiful! Lyrics flowed well with the plot of this songfic and your descriptions were truly stunning and vivid! Im glad that you wrote another songfic and yes, I know what you mean when you said this was 'lighter' than To Love You More. Well done! Looking forward to more of your songfics the next time you find a nice song =)
Pretty Green Eyes 2004-05-21 . chapter 1
That was an excellent song fic, you portrayed Squall excellently
Miragaze 2004-05-19 . chapter 1
So sweet! =D Wonderful Squinoa... I can see well how they may come across disagreements and misunderstandings like those. Again, very sweet!
SCI SS OR S 2004-05-19 . chapter 1
That was so cute. I can see where it's lighter than your other pieces, and the song is perfect for it. BTW I love that song. XD
~Kixy
Paper Bear 2004-05-19 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so precious.
Dark Angels 2004-05-19 . chapter 1
*tear sniffle* that was a really beautiful piece of writing, really well done I loved it.
Lucrecia LeVrai 2004-05-18 . chapter 1
Wow... a very good fic, I guess. ^^ I liked Squall's monologue.
Gwen 2004-05-18 . chapter 1
I think its good, I like the lyrics in there, helps it conect on an emtional level cuz its a good song in that way. Ha ha as if any of that made sense.
angel-brokensorrow 2004-05-18 . chapter 1
*sniffle* That was...*sniffle*...so romantic in a darker way. Although...Rinoa did seem to give up a little too easily...aw..I guess that's how real love works eh? ^_^ This...one-shot was beautifully written. It seemed like you took a very long time to write it...as in...um...going over it...revising...editing...something I'm a little too lazy to do with my writing...^_^' Our little secret right?
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