this is prety good.. may i suggest that you put the sections in different chapters.. you just like space down and i'm like wait are we still in the hospital... so if you do that it would be less confusing but great job and i hope to see more from you...

That was really great! just one lil' thing. On the
show you spell his name "Marc". srry i had to say that! luved it anywayz!

1st review, yeah! Ok, I love this fan fiction. But one question...will there be more?