nice:)

One sylabble: *LOL* ^_^

Haha...Hilarious...Just brilliantly written

*giggle*snicker* ... I suppose this technically should be under 'Parody' but whatever. I liked it.

lol! i LOVE fangirl stories! Please update soon!

lmao...that's great...^_^ this makes me very happy...a second chapter, perhaps? ^_^

*mftphbhst*
The above was a stifled snigger, btw, lest you wonder. I had to stifle it to keep from spraying tea all over my moniter.
Incidentally, Alyx, are you a member of GAFF? It seems to be a board you would enjoy. Whether you are or not, drop me an email and tell me.

Whoosh!
Completely didn't see that one coming!
Excellent job.

This made me smile.
I recommend to you Elijah's Doom, if you enjoy Lord of the Rings at all. In fact, it might be even funnier if you don't.

Yeah that was really funny.I'm someone who enjoys the occasional self-mockery and when it comes to Achilles I probably deserve it. Anyway cool story/thing.

I wish I could have been one of them... to die upon his sword... to see him before I close my eyes forever... kidding, kidding. Really unexpected, you should write more, perhaps on the others, carry on in the same fashion! Really funny :)

Mwahhaha...me likies. I do hope you continue on with this. It's highly amusing. Hmm...maybe you can do a Paris or Hector chapter for this? *evil snicker* Paris will probably get Hector to kill all his fangirls.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing this continued.

Wow.Totally wow.I love it.Are you going to make it longer?I think you should.It's really really good!Keep up the good work.Hope you read mine.
-Nikki

Appreciate it? Are you kidding? I absolutely *adore* it. ^__^ A far more better fic than some of those romance fics out there, and definitely the best fic in this section that I've read.

its pretty good