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*crickets chirping* Okay, this is starting to get annoying...another chapter doesn't exist anymore.

What happening to your chapters? This one has been erased as well. Please fix this!

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Nice chapter!

Who is that evil Gem person? She sounds horrible! *wrings Gem's neck* Is Ashley the same Ashley from elementary? :?

Keep up the good work. ^_^ And don't forget to stay cheerful! Enjoy the rest of spring break.

YO YO YO!

this certain episode besides the one with ur grandpa...was THE MOST DRAMATIC one yet. It had sadness, forgiveness, valeness and hei-ness. Tightness, off glassness and ruckusness.

It was straight tight and im happy to support this fic in any way that i probably and probably not have. This fic is my most favorite and i love it among all others that i've ever read.

Matt: Ya u ain't quittin is u?
Delvon: YO YO Kingdom Hearts 2 comin out next tuesday the bounced the release date to the 28
Justin: I WISH I COULD BUY KINGDOM HEARTS 2 FOR U!! SO I CAN KICK UR **!!
Me: If anybody is gonna be doin the asskickin its me! I'm the keyblade master I'm gonna wipe the floor with all of you rookies.
Everyone: ROKIES?!
Me: Ya rookies, i beat kurt zisa with the orginal kingdom key without using potions or any items, i beat that secret boss in neverland the same way AND i beat sephiroth with the kingdom key and 2 hi potions without dying!

Matt: As much as i'd hate to admit it... its true i seen him when he did it. -.-

Tookie: Um i really don't know u but i've read this fic from my friend kelvis's house cuz i don't have a PC at my home. I heard you wanted to participate in our game tournament thing with KH2. I'd like to say that there will be an event when you have to defeat 10heartless with sora alone and no help from Goofy or Donald. And all 10 of them rush you at once. It sounds truly entertaining and i am truly sorry you cannot start when we do.. but when u do get the game email kel so he can tell us it doesn't matter where we are or what items we tried so hard to get. we'll start over and start at the same time u do.

(on a side note my real name is Vincente they just call me Tookie for... i dunno reasons.. kel started it)

Everyone else: O.o... WTF?! Tookie doesn't talk to people.
Me: well...thats a first... anyway kiako chan back to the fic if u start it up again... try to cut down on pixie stixs.

All of the Guys: KICK ** KIAKO UR NOBODY's DOORMAT!

hehe awesome.

Your kakashi plushie's made with lots of love alright. ^_^ But love doesn't keep his head from falling off! O:

A mark of 'B'! O: That's awful!

Nice job on this again senpai.

way to go K-Ko

this one certianly had me out of my seat. Now lemme start by saying I KNEW KAKASHI PLUSHIE SENSEI was gonna have some kinda effect on the REAL KAKASHI somehow. And kuro looked alittle evil doing all those things to it. I like kakashi plushie sensei he's cool.

To tell the truth i do eat alot and never really get fat. I wonder wats up wit that... it makes me wonder sometimes. Zero also makes me wonder too with his stupidity and pervertedness. Zero in real is a mix of my best friend Matt whom I may put in a fic if he chills out about beating me in Soul Calibur 3 and a mix of my older brother whom i seem to catch watching hentai everytime i come home.

Your camping trip idea kicked maja ** and Matt read it too this is how the whole scenario went down.

Matt: "Yo who wrote dis S**T it's tighter then what you right ya B*H"
Me: " Hey shut up man... its good i know"
Matt: "Ya betta then what you write"
Me: "Shut up you damn mexican"
Matt: "Train an make me foo"
Me: "Err..whatever man you like the fic right?"
Matt: "fic?"
Me: "The story jackass do you like the story"
Matt: "Oh yea it's off glass way betta then the ** you write"

Yea we were in my room, Matt was playing Kingdom Hearts while I was on the computer. I read it first then he did.
Matt: TIGHT STORY KIAKO ORNITIER PERSON I DUNNO YOU LIKE THAT BUT DAMN THATS GOOD WRITTEN! U CAN WRITE WAY BETTER THAN THIS ** KELVIS ANYDAY!!AND HE LIKE 17 AND UR LIKE 14 XD XD XD XD!
ME: -.-

Anyway nice work I'm alittle sad that it's coming to a close though.

OH YEA BEFORE I CAN END THIS REVIEW I GOTTA TELL YA KINGDOM HEARTS 2 COMES OUT IN MARCH 31 ONLY ACOUPLE DAYS OFF FROM NOW. LETS GET THE GAME AT THE SAME TIME AND SEE WHO CAN BEAT IT FIRST!! TELL KURO TOO... ME AND LIKE 4 OTHER OF MY FRIENDS MADE BETS AND STUFF ALREADY. IF I LOSE TO ANY OF THEM I HAVE ACKNOWLEDGE THEIR GREATNESS AND GIVE UP WRITING FICS! DON'T WORRY IM GOOD AT THIS STUFF SO IM NOT GONNA LOSE!

SO ARE U AND KURO IN!!

hey this whole chapter was funny. WEM sounds something like Lenox we have about the same mall with alot of stores we call it Lenox.

Chichiri and the sea lions reminded me of my little brother. It sounds like something he would do! It was funny though but i couldn't figure out why they wanted him?!
Heiheichi is quite the mechanic i don't think i would have been able to fix and bear makin machine. I've looked at the skematics and it's not easy thumbs up to that dude. WAY OFF GLASS!

Going to chapters and building a fort of manga, sounds like a dream come true. I tried it once but i just kept knocking it down because i like to see things fall then the old guy runnin the place kicked me out because i was causin to big of a ruckus.

Zero: Ruckus?
Kel: It means trouble causing to big of a mess or something
Vale&Zero: OH

T.T

Anyway Kel freeing all of the animals with Chichiri and Heiheichi was the funniest stuff!! I laughed until i fell outta chair that was OFF GLASS! when i look at myself from this fic i can't help but to notice how much of an idiot i am XD! FUNNY STUFF!!

keep up da good work *thumbs up*

"Where in flying pigs were you?!"
Heheh I can imagine D3pa1 saying that. XD

man this chapter was deep perhaps too deep for me. Zero is an **.

*slaps zero over the head*

Zero:ow...

im sorry bout ur grandpops my grandpops is dead too i cried alittle but then igot over it because im sure he wouldn't have wanted me to be soft like that. He left me with good memories...

*crying*

Zabuza: shut up and stop cryin u magget!

Haha I haven't reviewed for awhile. XD

I got sick over the holidays too around the first week!

Kokuzoku? Sounds like Dark's real name or something. XD Or was that Kokuyoku? Can't remember...

Anticipating the next chapter! ^^ Keep up the good work!