Good so far. Please elaborate more in later fight scenes. update it soon please.

Hi I'm Selene and I have chosen this story to be one of my regular reads! Congradulations! Great ! Loved it! The one thing I must point out is there aren't any femal Nemekians. That's the only flaw!Good job!
The one and only,
Selene

REALLY AWESOME!! love this story to peices! When's the next Ch? ^_^

"Two thumbs up... 3 if I had another." - Me
"Best film...er, fic this year." - Me
"I read it twice!" - Me
"Frieza is a racist!" - Me
"That poor, poor namek.." - Me
"Great job Jess!" - Guess :P

Not too bad. I say keep it up.