LOL! Very good! Hey, you wouldn't mind reading my fics would you? They're titled 'Luna: Dragon of Vegetasei' and 'Forever In Your Debt'. I love your stories, even if they are a little weird! LOL!

NO! Veggie's hair!WAH, PLEASE WISH IT BACK! WAH

*grins* Does anybody in here watch "Ed, Edd and Eddy"? I don't know if it's just me, but that last line from Goten sounded just like Ed! *giggles* Goten as Ed... funny. Not as funny as this fic, though! I always wondered why Vegeta cut his hair in - NOOOO! I almost mentioned the forbidden, non-Toriyama spawn-of-Satan series where Goten mutates and Vegeta cuts his hair! FORGIVE ME, TORIYAMA-SAMA, FOR I HAVE SINNED! *sobs*

bwaahahahhaaaaaaa! so funny! poor vegeta... but i love all the little idiosyncrasies you put in here. you're a cool humour author. (but i've probably told you that already)

That was SO good! Man, Chuey, your stories are all so CUTE! - Good job!

I WUV THIS! AND BRA AND GOTEN R SO CUTE! VEGETA IS TITE! U ROCK! *added to favoriteslist*

LOL! Very funny!

*laughs hysterically* You are just sooooooo good at this humor stuff. Vegeta? Charm school? You're right... they don't mix... _

Ya know, after reading this, I realized that the "Breifs" family has done a very bad job of naming their kids...I mean, how would you like it if your name was Bra Briefs? ah yes, story *eats cookie and squeezes Vegeta plushie* that was funny, keep up the good work!

GREAT FIC, and i do NOT mind the chaptering.

Keep up this good work ne?

I love the Goten and Bura thing! That'd be such a cute trick! I can jsut see Vegeta blowing a fuse over that...and Vegeta would be really sexy if he were being nice like that...not that he's not sexy enough already _

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loved your story it was the bomb!

wow...that was good...I'm speachless...

That was a good one. You've developed your versions of the characters' personalities well; your stories are like what a MAD TV parody of DBZ would be like. I almost feel sorry for Goku; he gets distracted so easily! And Vegeta, what can I say? Poor guy gets manipulated through his pride at every turn. Keep writing!