  Drackial 2006-06-12 . chapter 9Wow, I've never had a chapter dedicated to me before, total awesomeness. But more importantly, to read the chapter! This story's so funny one can't help but love it's wackiness.
Heh, that's right, Hilary was stuck in the coat X3 Though I can't remember the significance of her part of this elaborate part. Though I still laugh at Kai in this story XD he makes me laugh
Yes, de-nile is not just another river in egypt Allison X3 How sad for Kai, only missed because of abuse, but every one has their own uses I guess
Oh man, poor guys, that all sounds painful...and girly where Ray is concerned *there goes my butt from laughing* Good thing I'm not in this story, the pain...
Heh, I can't believe that letter, and I just knew Felicia would already have "punishments" in mind after it. Poor Ray though, having to use Tyson's hat, but him and Max's reactions were funny, what with the "ready to see someone else receive punishements" and talking about torture chambers giddily.
Poor Allison, it IS looking a bit hopeless for her ^^; Kai is a bit scary here X3
Wow, someone actually inflicting a little bit of pain on Felicia, never thought possible, but spose it is. Still think it's funny how Bryan seems to be her little slave though X3 But then again, I'd say yes to her plans so long as no pain was forthcoming.
Coolness, can't wait for the next chapters *dances* Specially cause it's such a funny story, byz! (Sorry it's so long, but there's so much to comment on, that's what makes this story so special I guess) |
| Jess 2006-06-12 . chapter 9 This story is very good! And the grammar is good too. This story is very funny, and the TyHil was so cute, even though i'm more of a KaiHil fan, lol. Anyway, it's very good. Update soon!
~Jess |
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