It seemed unfinished to me, but good none the less. =)

-Creative Spark

Wow, this was really good! Poor Dick, that was very evil what was done to him, but as usual I loved the way you wrote it, this is good~

Too bad you seem to have made it just one chapter, because this is actually pretty good. Nightwing isn't my favorite, but he tends to impress me, and I simply love Roland Desmond's character (honestly, how many cool characters are there named Blockbuster?). Here's to hoping your idea of Rolly being alive is true, since I read in his profile at dcuguide.com that he's got invulnerability (I've seen him survive a collapsing building in issue 8). How can a mere bullet stop him? And from what I hear (in the Aftermath fic of this very archive) Rolly hired Tarantula to take out Nightwing. Besides, he's just too cool to kill off. Stupid idea. Keep up the good work, though. Cheers!

The End? NO! I want more! I loved the story and only hope that you will consider writing more to this fantastic piece in the near future.

Oh, dark and twisted... I like.

Wow. I mean, wow! Sorry, I'm not usually this inarticulate, only when I read something that takes my breath away. Now, if only DC is planning anything half as good down the line...