// "You're shivering," he said, trailing his hand down the rain-soaked sleeve of my shirt.
// "Yeah, that happens when you're cold," I replied. "Were you missing the whole ‘freezing my ** off' vibe?"

Those lines were laugh-out-loud HILARIOUS! I love the first-person viewpoint you told this through. It's nice to get into Meryl's head! You wrote it very well. Her thoughts were in-character, and you definitely got a few laughs out of me with Vash and Meryl's strange conversation. The kiss scene was very sweet, and well-written. The end was sad, though; it would be nice if Vash and Meryl crawled out of their denial for just a little bit... Anyway, great writing! Keep it up. I really enjoyed reading this.

-Alaena

I liked it a lot, and the ending was very appropriate, well done! :)

"He left his coat on the table, just as rain-soaked and pathetic as I was." best line ever.
i love it! all passionate, then cowardice. awesome! one of my fav. oneshots. ja ne!

AWW!! Kawaii!! I loved it! Yup yup yup!!

Aw

Such a kiss - then a run away scaredy Plant.

I believe several other reviewers have mentioned this already, but...that was a one-shot? Sure didn't feel like it. It was very well written and I liked it, but the ending felt like there should've been more to it. A bit confusing. So, Vash ran away after the kiss? Any particular reason for him doing that? I really think you should do a follow up for this.

this is a one shot?!?! your evil! truly EVIL!! (wonderful job, have absolutely no idea what it means)

wow! good story! I like it!

Aww... that was nice.
Unless the last couple lines imply that it *was* another one of Meryl's fantasies after all. Then I'm sad.
But still nicely done ^_^

having only been able to catch bits and pieces of Trigun until very recently, this did seem to ruin part of the ending for me (oh well, airs on monday anyway...) but if I had cared, I wouldn't have read it.
wonderful story, seems to be fairly in character, and just over-all enjoyable. ^_^ Definitly a good story.
oh, and btw: having read your profile, math is the tool of the devil.

I like this story very much. It's nice to see the back and forth between Vash and Meryl regarding hidden emotions that are rather close to the surface. I thought the last line was especially poignant. Arafel's right--sensual is a good word for this story. I really hope you share more with us in the future.

Your profile says your first language isn't English, but damn, you could have fooled me. This is a lovely one-shot (but can I say that I wish it wasn't going to be only one shot? ^_^) and I enjoyed seeing Vash call Meryl's bluff. Very sensual story - hope to see more from you.

-sigh- got to love a good fluff...