Finally! Someone who knows we hawaii residents speak pidgeon, lmao.
Most of the fics i read with Hawaii in it they all have grass skirts & stuff, and i'm like hello! We don't do that! But, really awesome fic! Love it so much!

PLS WRITE ANOTHER ONE UR GREAT STAR LUV U

did you know that you spelled "rumor" as "roomer". i love your stories

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I'LL BE KEEPING TEN EYES OUT!
Mustard: you don't HAVE ten eyes!
Me: ...oh yeah... darn... T_T

I absolutly love this whole story! It was great and I wish you would make yet another sequel...and another...and another... *walks off saying another over and over*

Ja Ne

~Mystery Chick~

its over T_T oh well at least it had a happy ending yay! ^_^ i loved it i wouldnt mind reading about kurama and star having thier kid

wahoo ^^ no it needs more WAHO yeah...yay! ^^

This is actually pretty good. :D .

very nice ending indeed, though you still said form instead of from ^_^;; but its ok and so you know its Keiko and Puu or at least thats the correct way to spell their names

very very very niice story and i hope you make a sequel ^_^

I've never heard of Everafter, but if it's Hiei/Botan I'm sure I would love it. This story, and the others were all wonderful!! Very well written and great plot lines. Not to mention the wonderful couple H/B, but yeah. Great job!

NO! TIS THE END! A SAD DAY IT IS! (But I did love the ending!)

that was a great chapter ^_^ i wish it woulda been longer but thats ok it was good ne wayz ^_^

Yay! Please put it up soon?!?!?!? But I do hate to see this story end, I loved them all so much!

^_~ aw I'm gonna miss the trilogy! Ah well, all good things must come to an end... get the last chapter out soon k?!