Fascinating!

Wow! i didn't expect it to be 'him'! this is pretty good! going into 'his' past! i just loved 'him' so much! please do write more to this, but i don't care when, as long as i get to read it! and did 'he' really loose an eye? i didn't know that! great job on the dialouge. very great job. keep up the great work!
Karana Belle

Excellent work! The tension you create and maintain is perfect.
I'm not sure what browser the other reviewer is using, but to me on IE 6.0 it looks fine.

An interesting take on how Yuber came to be a Black Knight. Not one I particularly agree with, but interesting nonetheless.
I might suggest better paragraphing. It's rather hard to read in its current format.