you should write another straight fic _ *backs away in fear of you killing me before i turn 16* this one isn't bad tho oo;; just the way it's typed (only taking up 1/2 the screen) annoys me :) k.. i'm done now..

excuse me, kanemoshi, this is the soul of this story, and this soul is becoming agitated. this soul would greatly appreciate an update before the evil half of this soul emerges and conquers your sould so that this soul has two souls and will so continue that quest to those who do not update!...thank you mucho...tenshi the disturbed soul

can i have a HALELUJIA? thank you...i, ang would personally like to thank you, authoress, for finally...after a very long period of time...continued my marvoulous story...so once again i am in your debt and i give you the benefit of my gratitude...so,...WRITE SOME MORE! thanx muchly chiquitita, i will tell you this tomorrow if you dont get it sooner and in your words...sayonara

cute story :-P

WOOHOO!NOW I CAN REVIEW CUZ MY COMPUTER WORKS NOW!anyway

dear authoress...finally relief...but, as u know my satonic greed once again takes over and i must know what comes next. write more damn it. or else i shall come to your home and take ur ps2. muahahahaha. evil deeds come so easily to mind. otherwise...sure, it is of course vunderful now write more!

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HI there, i finaly got this thing to . i cant wait until you write the next chapter its getting very interesting. i might get a name on here later. bye and ttyl

well authoress, i figure that ur goin to rite more real soon...or else...muah hahhaahah. thats rite, u must write or i will pluck the evil pocky stick weilding army from the seventh region of hell and i will send them to our home to desimate all of your fake mangas! MUAHHAHAHAHA, otherwise its grand and write more. signed of course by the critic of all of your work, tenshi

jessy! write more on this story damnit
i will have to force you. dont make me send the forces of hell after you, you know how dangerous pocky sticks can be