my review for your story: its not all rainbows and sunshine! btw, how can you call a story sarcasm? you're the least sarcastic person i know. and its not my fault if ya dont like my review- you told me to review.

Well, that was certainly a unique spin on Laley, Naley and just plain Haley, but I adored the intensity of...everything. The dialogue was a bit jumbled. However, your description of rain being like seemingly innocent red lips, which will inevitably betray you, and the myriad of emotions in Haley's eyes was spectacular. I'm looking forward to this story's continuation.

sexy write more soon!

Is this the end of your story? I hope not because I am enjoying it please update soon thanks!

I love your story! Nathan and Haley divorced because he cheated? Awesome! Just what I think will happen on the show, too. Love that you are making it Laley so far. Keep it that way and continue soon!

Thats AWSOME you need to update soon

Very different, but good start.
PLEASE CONTINUE!
~*~Tardychick06~*~

kind of wierd but okay...i am interested to see what happens.

its really good! I never liked Laley but i kinda like it in this story. And the whole Nathan crying thing was sad, and made him seem even more sexy.