Electrogurl 2008-09-26 . chapter 16 I think the story was awesome. It was really actually great! But there wasn't enough kissing, so you'd probably add some more. If you write any more stories, I'll be sure to again review. AND THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR KEEPING YOUR STORY TRUE!
I'm a poet and I didn't know it!
I'll probably read all your stories, but if it's a romance between Roll and Megaman / Lan and Maylu, I'll be sure to read it! |
1TraceMemory 2008-07-11 . chapter 16I realize I'm probably your oh, only 374th reviewer for this amazing story and you've probably already heard this many times before but: This is the most exciting, lovable, memberal and well written Mega/Roll fic I've ever read in a long time! From the first paragraph of every chapter to the final ending chapters, you got me hooked and aprehensive to read more each night and smiling widely at every Mega-Roll moment. You're awsome about introducing your own characters and working with the given ones because from my little knowledge of other characters besides Megaman, Roll, Lan, Maylu, I can honestly say you bring out the best of each character's personalities very well. I've been so inspired and moved by your story that I've not only added you to my elite Author List and Favourite Story Lists, but I'm in the process of working on a lengthy MegaRoll, LanMaylu fanfic, which I have yet to title. Basicly, Lan n Mega get a message from Maylu n Roll saying to save them from Maylu's dreadfully boring cousin Heika by spending time together on a Saturday. Mega goes to personally give Roll the message, sneaks up on her, reads her diary and they eventually start cuddling after Mega calms an accusing Roll. I'm gonna add that Maylu interrupts, they get the message, go to the park, Lan and Mega buy Maylu and Roll ice cream, go to movie, etc. But anyway, back to your story's praising. Its not too slow-paced and boring and faced paced to get really interested and your chap titles got to the point, which is good. At first, I assumed Mr.Wildstar or Naraku were Maylu's captors, which eventually got me doubting and I went, "Wow, I was right!" when I read it really was him. I'm glad Mega confessed to Roll and they're relationship blossomed perfectly. The humor got me to really well and I smirked my laughter down.Overall, this was a fantasric contribution to the dwindling amount of suberbly written Mega Roll couplings. If you can, could you give me some title suggestions for my MegamanRoll/LanMaylu story? Thanks and great job! Please produce sequel to this wonderful story. Bye^-^ |