"If it even seems like you're distracted, I'm neutering the kappa."

lol LOVE SANZO!

but yes, you wrote this adorably! *sigh* aww Hakkai

That was adorable! I think I did like it better when it was combined, and when Hakkai was there when Gojyo woke up.
But Gojyo throwing the mug had so much dramatic effect. xD
Love this story!

Alternate ending is definitely the way to go. It feels truer to the depth of Gojyo & Hakkai's friendship and more in character.

ah, yes. I do prefer the second version. sweetest.
so, the final version is just perfect, because I like whan sanzo and goku are standing at the door. ^^
well done, you're one of the best.

BRAVO! I just love all you 585 fics! Everything how you write involving GojyoXHakkai always feels so remarkably natural and in-character!

I really liked your final version - BTW. I imagine that Hakkai would feel all guilt-ridden and self-loathing and say something Gojyo takes the wrong way... Then Gojyo would just get angry over Hakkai's perceived rejection... since our hanyou so rarely allows himself to seem vulnerable. So I thought the final compromise you made with the ending was the perfect way to go.

And the monk and monkey catching them? Just priceless. ^_^

The only suggestion I have (and please please please do not think this is a flame because I truly adore all your writing and am a big fan of yours) is that I've always imagined that Hakkai is the first one to wake up in the group... which matches better with your first ending... The problem with that is that... like your first ending... I would also imagine that he would be so ashamed that he would leave the room and want to avoid the topic... (I liked how you compromised in your final version and kept them in the same room...) but I thought it would be nice to have some explanation on why Gojyo was up first? Maybe throw in a line where Gojyo wakes up and gloats a little over the fact that he is the reason why Hakkai seems to have slept later than usual that day? ^_~ Anyways... just a suggestion.

Truly love all your 585. Look forward to more in the future!

very nicely done

.. Y'know, I've never really liked Hakkai/Gojyo pairings. ... now I'm pretty sure I'm starting too. ... Haha.

This ending's meh favourite, by the way. Too cute.

it's good

good alternative ending though i prefered the first one.

god they really are in love aint they. beautifull again!

aw cute... no cute doesn't do it justice, beautiful.

They were both equally amazing. Though I have to say that the whole conversation about forever being a long time and all of Gojyo's little answers was proubably my favorite part. I really did enjoy that. ^^

Keep writting. ^^

That part made me smile, I like how you didn't just have them wake up to a happy ending. Too many people dp that these days. ^^

You should try writting something along these lines between Goku and Sanzo. They would be aninteresting little couple to play out seeing as how Sanzo seems so against the idea and all.

Very good story thus far, I like it lots. ^^

Wow. That was different from any other fic of yaoi I had ever found myself reading based on thoese two before...it seems to believeable. I like it!

I checked to see if I had reviewed this fic and I haven't, which is unuaual because I have read it several times...so...I think it is time I told you I love this fic and have really read it more than once and each time enjoied it as much as the first time maybe even more. Thanks for the romance I think is just got to be.