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Katescats 2008-11-10 . chapter 1
Hi WOW! That was a very good story.
trecebo 2005-08-26 . chapter 1
I remember reading this...You rewrote a bit and made it B/T. It's deep and sad...
chopsticks 2004-07-28 . chapter 1
That was absolutely beautiful, Rivie. Wonderful!
I love the way you portray Miss Parker and Sam's relationship in this. They've been working together for so long, it's only natural that they be friends. It's a nice little addition to both characters and helps to flesh them out a bit more than the show ever did.
You did both characters justice.
I liked the first-person past narrative you used. Normally that can be a tricky thing to use (Just look at any of my first-person stuff!), but you didn't make it stumble at all. It flowed exquisitely.
Love it all.
Erikstrulove 2004-05-26 . chapter 1
Awe! You just HAVE to keep going. Come on! That was so sweet, sniff...
Alia G. L 2004-05-23 . chapter 1
Wow. That was really good. Poor Sam. I really liked this fic. It's nice to see that both Sam and Miss Parker are human. Awesome. I look forward to reading more fics from you.
ShadowElfBard 2004-05-23 . chapter 1
Very nice. I love how you have been able to see so much potential in the character Sam, and use many of your fanfics to delve deeper into his psyche. This one, like the others, was well done and well written. Glad to see you back in action, RRP, and you will continue to be one of my favorite fanfic authors!
Anastasia Who 2004-05-22 . chapter 1
Very good. I'm so glad Parker was there for Sam. Poor Poor Sam. Really great fic. Is this the end or is there more? You should write more. I would love to hear more.
Thunderchild 2004-05-22 . chapter 1
Aw... you posted it. Good for you... that took my mind of the Hell I am living for about 3minutes. Yay you. Now (this is an order too) continue writign some fics like this to bump up the number of MP/S fics out there... I do not wanna be the lone voice in the wilderness forever (though I am getting use to it)
MKP
SylverFyre 2004-05-21 . chapter 1
As promised, here I am. Wow, that was great. Beautiful. Keep up the great work there, girl. ;)
Maggy 2004-05-21 . chapter 1
How I *love* fanfics that take me by surprise-- without disclaiming "AU" or ignoring even that while boldly transgressing characterization.
This commits neither affront-- it is a GREAT little fic which *chastely* goes to a place rarely visited in these fanfic pages. WE know there's a time and place for the Ice Queen, and WE know about the woman behind the mask. I'm so glad "he" does, too.
I have *never* begged for another installment (and I am not doing so now), but it seems to me that you could write a second, equally short, fic in which these characters resume their professional roles. (Good heavens, I'm professoring you! Please forgive me. I just turned in my grades day before yesterday...)
Great fic. Loved the characterization. Thank you for the insight into my dear sweeper's life. Was "I hadn't seen him this bad since college" yours, or did I miss something canonical?
DreaminofLorien 2004-05-20 . chapter 1
Oh wow.. *mouth open and tear running down cheek* Wow.. Riven dearest, your writing keeps getting better.. *wipes tear away* Keep it up!
gemini006007 2004-05-20 . chapter 1
Hi RRP,
Great story. Love the stories involving the other characters from the pretender. It was nice to see Sam's more humane side as well as Miss Parker's. Looking forward to more of your stories.
Mercy
pretender-gurl 2004-05-20 . chapter 1
Loved it! It's really nice to read fics where Sam isn't always the bad guy. Thanks for the good read!
Emily
Miss Dynamite (guess what - too lazy to login) 2004-05-20 . chapter 1
I love it!
Will u continue this? would love to read more!
Miss Dynamite
Miss Parker 2004-05-20 . chapter 1
I like this story a lot!
It's great to see som Sam and Parker fic's!
keep up the good work!
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