Oh gawds, you wrote this one! XD

I really really like the pairings you write. They're the little-supported ones that need more love. :)

The start of this fics was nice...yes, I liked the start. As in, "Jenny-Oh". Sue me, I thought it was sort-of sweet. :)

The dream had been real. Very, very real. And even if the ending was abrupt, I liked it. :)

I knew this would make me cry...

your lucky I can see the keyboard, is all...

oh, growing up is so very bittersweet

I like how you've kept the essence of the characters especially. I also like how you have them so uncertain of what the remember, but knowing that it was more than a game. There's a kind of nifty deja-vu feeling to it.

I enjoyed this story. It left me wanting more.

Quite nice. I know exactly what you mean about the characters not saying what you want them to. I've been in situations like that myself. However, the story came out quite nicely. Is there more? I suggest that there should be, but do what you like. ttyl, Pullmanlover

hey! I LIKED (oops capslock) it! it was cute and well written, very good for your first fic! i can't wait to see other stories from you.

cheers,
-Norah

I love it! i read those books last year and i have just now started looking at someof the stories that other people write about them, verry well writtenif i say so myself.! well keep at it!
Corynn..