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lin 2008-08-03 . chapter 3
you whright very interesting storys! i hope then yuo'll wright samething else! come on! its been 3 year allready!!
message.in.the.inferno. 2007-07-17 . chapter 29
Brilliant!
closet.Edward 2006-06-13 . chapter 29
fan freaking tasic story. i cant wait to read the sequel or whatever you have planned after this. it looks dark but im pretty sure we'll all enjoy it. i should start looking for it now!! well, lemme say this is a kick-** story. dude, you're totally going into my fav authors :)
closet.Edward 2006-06-13 . chapter 28
Excellent fight!! i liked it!! this story has been freaking hilarious so far. i find it wierd that after reading this story long time ago im only now coming back to review it. sorry i didnt review before. someone helped me realize how important it is to u guys to review. so here i am.
closet.Edward 2006-06-13 . chapter 1
A nice start to what i'm guessing by the look of your number of reviews, is an excellent story!! *unless those are all flames lol* Good characters development all that. So I'm looking forward to reading your story ^_~
sballLuvr5 2006-04-16 . chapter 29
omg im so mad because i've been waiting a year for this chapter and i didnt notice it came out a year ago... i've been waiting all this time when it was there all along!! anyways, this chapter was really good!!
Kristi
Alayne Cira 2006-01-01 . chapter 12
The previous chapter features the mysterious stranger as a raven instead of a crow.
PatronusPotter41192 2006-01-01 . chapter 8
Well, you said you suck at titles, but you gave this chapter the perfect one. Guess Harry wasn't the one who got 'hit.' That whole thing about him disappearing on the picture was going a little overboard on my part, you just made me think of it when he saw the picture and said nothing had changed. Why does he have to stop whoever this person is? If he's alive, everything must have worked out...
PatronusPotter41192 2006-01-01 . chapter 7
I guess Harry was the one who got 'hit' or whatever. Did it ever occur to Hermione that Ron said she was a good friend b/c he feels the same way as her: he likes her, but doesn't think she likes him, so he acts like he only likes her as a friend??
PatronusPotter41192 2006-01-01 . chapter 6
That was good. I'm glad Ron & Casey broke up. I find it interesting that Harry is now able to use Occlumency and Legilimency- Does that mean he'll figure Jared out?
PatronusPotter41192 2006-01-01 . chapter 5
I liked this chapter. I wonder why Malfoy didn't also get in trouble. I really don't like this Casey girl. I wonder what this whole 'who will be hit?' thing is...
PatronusPotter41192 2006-01-01 . chapter 4
Good Chapter. Ok, I gotta admit, I got the R/Hr's son thing from some1's review, but I thought about it and it fits. I did this on my own, though- I think Jared is here to make sure R/Hr stay together, he sees Casey as a threat. I think he will start to disappear on that pic, if R/Hr look like they won't get together. I know, it sounds like Back to the Future, but w/e.
PatronusPotter41192 2006-01-01 . chapter 3
Ok, I think he's R/Hr's son from the future. The similarities the other Gryffindor's were noticing, the things hermione noticed, the way she was absent-mindedly getting his clothes ready for him- it all adds up.
PatronusPotter41192 2006-01-01 . chapter 2
Good. Ok, I've come up with he's somehow related to Ron & maybe from the future. It said something about inhereting Hermione's softer features, which I found confusing.
PatronusPotter41192 2006-01-01 . chapter 1
Sounds like a good story. I'll keep reading. I'm just frustrated b/c I can't figure out who Jared is. I thought Harry at first, but that doesn't seem to work anymore.
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