again, such spot on characterizations. you add little details that make the characters all the more real...it's awesome. gonna go read the rest now~

Elle's story was the best IMO. Her thoughts, tone, and words are soaked in hatred and bitterness. You brought out her hatred/jealous of Beatrix very well, and also her thoughts of Budd were right on the mark, considering that she kills him in the movie. This was a wonderful series. Awesome job!

And so ends the Massacre series. GOOD F**KING JOB!

You captured Elle's personality really good, she's one of my favorites. There was nothing wrong with this one at all.

this is very detailed and stuff, i like it. this is some of the best stuff i've seen so far

Very impressed, she's a difficult character and you captured her so well in this!

I have a feeling this was the most difficult one to do. I've loved all of them. Kudos.