I don't think you needed the R rating, perhaps a PG13 instead. It's a well written story.

Great work Shannon. A case story and GSR what more could a geek lover ask for?

Well done! What a great story! I look forward to your next!

What a good way to end this story. Thank you. I look forward to your next story.

Ah, wonderful, wonderful story! I just can't get this stupid dopey grin off of my face. Remarkably well written, TPTB really need to hire you, right now :P

Truly hated to see this one end, but you ended it beautifully. Fun dialogue in this chapter. Again--REALLY great balance of interesting case and G/S romance in the whole story. Nice job.

That is such a great way for this story to end! I really loved the whole fic. If only they could work together like this in the show! I hope to read more of your fics, keep it up! Joy

That was terrific. A great ending. Though I'm with Sara, and wish there was something they could get those two on! Wonderful.

Basically, aw! I love a happy ending. You've got me all smiles! I look forward to reading any of your future work. I've really enjoyed this fic!

This really was an excellent story. Great job with the Grissom and Sara characterizations. Nice build up in their relationship. And I don't think anyone would complain if you added another chapter to go through dinner. :-D

Nice chapter. I like how they interacted over lunch -- getting to know each other again, but still tentative. Great job. Thanks.

There's nothing better than a happy G/S ending. I'm glad Grisom was the one that initiated the kiss.

Oh Shannon, so sorry to see this end! You always come up with such original plots and keep everyone in character. Thanks for a great read!

A beautiful finish for a great fic.

I've enjoyed this fic imensly.

Another lovely chapter. Let's have them skip lunch and go directly to dessert! ;)