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| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 13, | abuseOkay, I am sure that you meant this as a very serious scene and I should be respectufl and sobbing my heart off because ickle Tommy-kins is in a coma. But...it was so mid-day soap opera that I fell into giggle instead. If he dies and a twin shows up...someone shall die! (kidding) but still...soap opera? ta, Dizzy |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 12, | abuseAt least they found him. Not even that much can be done for some missing people. ta, Dizzy |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 11, | abuseWell, looked like Tommy had an out of body experience. Nicely written. I am so glad he didn't die. Though I bet Johnny Depp would be glad if the character died some how. ta, Dizzy |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 10, | abuseTOM'S DEAD! YOU KILLED HIM! |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 9, | abuseOkay, if Judy and Harry get stuck in the lock up too...I swear I'll kill them all before making Sure Tom get to a hospital. And then I'll spring the news on him that he's my long lost husband! yeah...that would work... |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 8, | abuseSafe maybe, but with some broken ribbs. M...ribs...*drools* |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 7, | abuseAh, fluffy moments abounds! |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 6, | abuseDoug...man...your such an idiot! Would have cuffed the kid and then gone to the partner. Gotta think of what's dangerous to ones health here! gaw! |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 5, | abuseRescue time. For as fast as this is going. It is very nice. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 4, | abuseVery, very nice. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 3, | abusetoby had better call someone for help. |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseOkay, I am going to go get food...but I had to see what went down. Though, I do have a question...in most stories like this I see the word "pig" used a lot in relation to police officers. I ain't saying you can't use it, I was just making an observation of my own... By the way, I usually don't read fics that don't have summaries, but the number of reviews you got were staggering so I figured I had to give it a try. ta, Dizzy |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAah...okay... I am confused, but I suppose that's what you meant to do. Er -- anyway, this was very interesting. I'm gonna get some food and go on to the next chapter. ta, Dizzy |
| andaere 2007-10-17 ch 24, | abuseVery very sweet, good story, and I'm glad that you hinted on a healing process, because I love healing processes. If that made sense. Anyway, I'm glad this is not a slash fiction and you show what good friends Doug and Tom are. I know not all of this is true, but sometimes to me it seems like people nowadays write Tom/Doug slash because they don't understand how you can have a truely deep friendship and love someone, but not romantically. It seems like they think it would be easier to write the bond as romantic and not just really good friends. Of course, this is just my generalation and my opionion. I loved your story but I looks like you haven't updated in a long time, which is a bummer. =( |
| rubydoo 2007-04-23 ch 25, anon. | abuseplease please please update soon. |