Kristine Batey, the originator of this challenge and the grandmother of the Inuyasha fandom, passed away this past week. ;_; She never did get around to grading these . . .

XDD I love that contest. I actually counted the cliches o.o ...i /did/! Was one of them Inuyasha calling Houjou,"hobo"? And describing Kagome's hair and eyes like that? And using craploads of incorrect Japanese? Shee...*shuts up* And Inuyasha saying something about raamen and Kagome oden?

*snerk* This story is great. I loved it. I love your parodies. Keep them up!

Um, do I have to comment? *laughs* Sorry. I've
always wanted to say that. But if you worked a
little more on it it would be awesome. If and
when you have the time please check out my Inu-
Yasha fanfic(title: Nube)!
Loves,
Goddess of Anime

O.o! This was nuts! But pretty damn funny if you ask me! Heh heh, I hope there is more to this! ^_^ Until next time! ^_^

Yeah, 500 points easy. Maybe more. The line "'...' Makoto-Gwendollewlyn sweatdropped" alone is worth a bushel of points. I'm honored to have been responsible for driving the first crack into your writer's block. And I love Lothar's review.
Bachan

Cute. The story accomplishes what it set out to, i.e. be stupid and funny, so congrats. I still want to see you update somethng though, and maybe this will set off a spark of something. Or maybe I'm jinxing it. Anywho, good job.
-Alma

Kya! I love it!! So funny... I like the line, "Feh, she's just my **, not my mate." So great!! I hope you write more!! I think I counted twenty-two...

good job just dont rate it PG if u put b!t*h in it
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The fansubs of my life were done by Anime Empire, because they will never be licensed. Ever.