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Evilnor 2008-11-22 . chapter 7
quite an enjoyable read! All the characters seem to be in character, and I like your take on the interaction between Hiei and Yukina. Poor Hiei . . . Kurama and Yusuke will never give him any peace until Yukina knows, but he still refuses to tell her, and by this point it would be too awkward for him to tell her, anyway. The premise is a plausible one, too, though I honestly don't see Yusuke attending most of his classes regardless of spirit detective assignment or not.

I presume this story's on hiatus, though, since there hasn't been an update for well over a year. Such a shame, really.
ThineClementine 2008-09-29 . chapter 7
This is a magnificent piece of work!
The characters are perfect, and everything easily grabs the attention!
I adore the storyline so far, and how all the things fall into place uniquely to your story.
It's brill and I love you!
My heart quite literally dropped when I scrolled up to check the date it was last updated and try and guess when the next update would come, only to find it was over a year ago.
I really do love this story.
If you ever do update again, be sure that I'll be here to read it.

Thank you for writing beautifully!
Humbly Yours,
Clementine
deitarion/SSokolow 2008-09-02 . chapter 7
Excellent story. I hope you get back to it eventually. There are far too few well-written crossovers between Harry Potter and anime. (Probably because it's often difficult to reconcile the differences in tone between the chosen stories)
kitsuneluvuh 2008-07-31 . chapter 7
Aww, that part at the end was cute. =>.
Out-Of-Control-Authoress 2008-07-19 . chapter 7
Cool fic...it's not quite the conventional Yu YuxHarry Potter crossover, and I like that. Care to update, even though it's been nearly a year?
Lucia Varhiet 2008-05-20 . chapter 7
I am enjoying your fic, it is very well written.
It's hard to find a writer who knows both stories so well that they are able to put them together without making any of the characters seem out of place.
I hope you continue, I'll watch for updates.
^_^
William Bexley 2008-05-08 . chapter 7
I like your story. It's interesting.

The only complain I'd have, is that things move far too quickly. And it's a bit hard to follow sometimes. Like Hiei's class (random example). They are in the classroom, and then you tell us what happens after the class, and then you go back to class so Hiei can say something. That constant back-and-forth is a bit tiring, but nothing drastic.

Other than that, I think it's pretty cool. Just, I've noticed you're using "things don't add up" and "there was something up" a lot.

Sorry if it sounds like flamming -- I'm just pointing a few things out, dunno if it will help you much...
oOKeairaOo 2008-05-02 . chapter 7
Randomly decided to sit down and read this again. xD Still love it as much as ever. I hope that you have time to update again sometime soon!
YusukiShredder 2008-04-26 . chapter 6
Awesomeness! XD
emo-foxkitten 2008-04-01 . chapter 7
good stuff write more
emo-foxkitten 2008-04-01 . chapter 1
i love these fanfictions and i love yours more are Hiei and Kurama going to be together or Kurama Yukina?
Fox Loves Shinigami 2008-03-28 . chapter 7
awsome fic plz update soon ^_^ Ja.
PleiadesWolfe 2008-03-14 . chapter 7
I liked that you brought Keiko in for a while. It was good for the two of them to see each other again. Why isn't Luna on the list? To me it seems like she should be one of them.
PleiadesWolfe 2008-03-14 . chapter 1
This sounds really interesting. I look forward to them finally getting to school and interacting with the others.
Sonia120462 2008-03-08 . chapter 7
really good! in fact, your style of writing is really new and fresh, at least to me. Update Soon!
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