that last line was perfect, totally the JOTT relationship in less than 20 words
-stray

i LOVE this story! please COMTINUE!
u r a great jean writer. i love how u put 'it's simple because i can't control love. love controls me' please continue

Thats what i mean, every one thinks of jean as a tease when shes not, you have to look at it from her pov and in a positive way, this fic is kinda like my fic sometimes it shows how she feels. Jean wants other relationships before the one she knows will last. So i think you did a spectacular, amazing, wondeful, phenominal, , awesome , MARVELous job!

Whoa!
Inever thought of it that way. Hey I figured she just did it to tease Scott and to drag Duncan through it 'cause he's stupid enough to go along with it. But that's just me.
Great perception on a character that seems to be already defined by how she acts rather than who she is. Like all those awards won, grades earned, attention gained...that stuff. Nicely put. Later!
~Peace215~

this is great. it shows what goes on in Jean's head. Please keep writing.

Well, it was good and interresting, carry on :-)
Wen

An interesting take on Jean's relationship with Duncan. I always figured that the reason she was with him was the reason she was supposedly attracted to Logan in the comicverse - that he was 'exciting'. But with Duncan I never bought it because he was just such a jerk. Basically. I think this is a slightly more realistic take on things. And Jean being the way she was in Evo, ie, stuck up and proud, it'd make sense that she'd feel confused and a little frightened that Scott has such a big effect on her emotions, thus undermining her powers. So kudos for the great little bit of psychology. ^-^

wow...that was deep, and amazing. I love reading this all from Jean's point of view, seeing inside her mind, and I think you did a fantastic job with it.

Wow...this was amazing. You really did a phenominal job portraying Jean's emotions, thoughts, and fears. It's about time that Jean gets some respect instead of mindless abshing. This story is definitaly going on my favorites list...and I'm usually pretty picky about that...peace.

Cute little one shot. Facing an uncertain future can be daunting for a teen - and this is a funny but logical way for Jean to control at least that part of her life.

You're right Jean, I think you're crazy. :-P