very good! whana reade more about it.. ) so please hurry up!

:blinks: and you stopped here? this is a brilliant fic! Decks so evil! LOVED IT! please- i know its probably been ages since you wrote this and you wouldn't have been expecting someone to read it but, would you consider writting another chap? becuase really i think this is a great peice of work!

BR

Zack, Ben and Zane? I'm confused now... when is this plot taking place?

Why would Lydecker make Joel observe Max and whom she meets? Bling should have been able to tell!

It's just a plot to get Lydecker, right? Bling wouldn't do that...

Bling? Whatdayamean Bling? A traitor?

Oh, I was so upset when Bling betrayed them all. I don't think he could ever do that. Poor Zack. I thought Ben was dead? Oh well.

MORE MORE MORE!

Hi does your brain function on the same wavelength as other people? Do you live in our society or are from some moutainous civilization that forgot about the rules of civilization? You can't use the F and S words in something thatis rated PG you stupid idiot. Perhaps if you had seen a movie or tv show in the last 5 years you'd know that. Get your head out of your ass and figure out ratings systems nimrod, or I'm reporting your sorry ass.

OOO please countiue this sooooooooooooooooooooon!_

ya right...I don't think so!

You have to continue, its a very exciting story. From what you've wrote so far it seems nery deep. I would've never guessed that BLING was going to traitor on Logan. thats a really good twist. I hope to see more of this story because you HAVE to finish it...

-Eyes

Excuse me? What just happened? This was really good, but...where's the rest? Max will not stay captured by Lydecker, right? What is Lydecker going to do with all her friends? Please continue this story, you are a fantastic writer!

MORE! This was so good! We need more soon!

Very nice... Well written... I don't particularly like the idea of Bling going over to the dark side, but hey it works. I do like Joel.. :} Lydecker sold out by a guy with a consience... keep it up! I wanna know what happens!