Darn you! You are ruining my joke! I just hope the punchline can survive the delays in its execution...

Keep at it kid, you got talent.

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You finally posted it! You know that I love it, but I have to say that the straight text is hard to read. Lots of people put an extra line between every paragraph, and that makes it A LOT more readable. You might want to think about doing that.