A great story. Very good.

This did give more of an ending than Joss gave us (can you believe that! "Let's get to work, people." Ha!) You should continue this, if you want. Tell us all what YOU meant the light to be. Anyway, just my opinion. Nice job, though. Like I said, more closure than Joss gave us.

I liked it alot, very descriptive, but an ending could have been nice, since there wasn't one for the finale either.