beautiful smut!both Amon and Robin are in character!keep writing more!

Wow! that was a real neat read! I liked it! 5/5!

That was great, I loved it, I'm printing it out so I can read it in school during boring classes or on really long car trips.

hell yeah! Go Amon!! Go Robin! You totally rock dude! Wonderfully orchestrated and in character!! Be proud of yourself. Pat yourself on the back!!

Wow, that was umm verry interesting, really, really interesting.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

(applause)I LOVE IT!I really like the way you discribed every thing. you should diffienetly
write more!

Your writing is beautiful! The detail you used was amazing. I really hope you continue this story (or write another).

That, my friend, was freakin' awesome. *giggle* I loved it. This was a great one-shot type thingy, maybe even a chapter story? Hm?? *hinthint, nudgenudge* Anyway, can't wait to read more of your work. Arigato and sayonara for now!
~Jme~

WOW~! that was awesome! please continue this, 'cause it could get really interesting!! -lara

Steamy.
Um, you had a couple of there/thier problems, but other then that, great story!

Aiee! I love the lyric repetition of 'two years.' Goodness but this is intense. It built up perfectly. I hope to see more.

I love the timber of this story. I can add very little that has not already been said.
Two years ago. Wow.
One small editing note though, it should have read 'she climbed onto the bed' not 'she climbed unto the bed'
Unto generally denotes conceren or reverence.

Subtle, understated, almost dreamlike. You move seamlessly between observation and action. (+ favs)

I SO LOVE IT! Lol! Sorry, it's just such a good story, I'm so glad that I got to read it! I love the ending! Lol! Great story!
Bana