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Pyra 2006-03-14 . chapter 11
great story, i would love to see it finished
GuyverZero 2006-03-07 . chapter 11
i had read this fic on another web page might have been the cutelucca page not sure but this 1 had me rolling and laughing my ** off i hope this does get finished 2. good luck
Ghost Man 2005-04-28 . chapter 11
I appreciate everything, guys. Unfortunately, both myself, and especially "Fire Eyes" have been busy. Me with school. She with her own things. Like I mentioned, this was spawned from a role play. I love Lucca as much as she so we figured we would try something with her character and my own.

The support is greatly appreciated, and my soul longs to continue/finish all my stories. However, time will tell when that will happen. If I had started in High School, I would have had some decent time. However, I started writing late, and thus, had to weigh everything in the balance. Next year, I won't have as many college hours to take, so maybe I'll get lucky with this story if not others I have been working on.

Don't expect too much over the summer because a lot of the weekend work I could have been spent writing went into working for some teachers to earn money to go to Japan. That's where I'm going so please forgive me if I can't fork out anything.

Thanks Again,

GhostMan
Groove 2005-04-28 . chapter 11
Please update this story! It's cool!
Ominae 2005-04-27 . chapter 11
Nice story! When are you updatin'?
jknight21 2004-07-21 . chapter 11
Please update soon
B.C. Sealey 2004-06-30 . chapter 1
Hey intresting Sory. I'll be sure to read it. Anyway, I'm the Evangelion wrtier you sent a review to asking about becoming my proofreader. Email me your address, I'd like to talk.
jknight21 2004-06-05 . chapter 10
Great story. I just read all 10 chapters and I think you have filled in some of the plot-holes that were in the game. Keep up the good work.
Regrem Erutaerc 2004-06-04 . chapter 10
Yet again, another great update you two.^_^ I can't wait to see the next one.
cs 2004-06-04 . chapter 10
I'm enjoying this very much, especially now that I see you are portraying Magus in a calm, intense, intelligent way =). He seems to be exceptionally powerful, which makes sense, since in the game he'd either been drained by summoning lavos or drained by lavos directly whenever we saw him. I feel like Jacious should feel more awe at all the things he's been experiencing and witnessing on a first hand basis. Maybe a bit more introspection with some italics could help there. I'm curious to see whether you'll let jacious mention that he does in fact know schala's whereabouts, since he's already mentioned the sequel to one of the characters. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more =). Thanks for updating often + writing it in the first place!
Regrem Erutaerc 2004-05-21 . chapter 6
Very nice fic thusfar. You two are doing great with this new fic. I'm very impressed Ghost and Cute Lucca.^_^ It is truely impressive, and I really like how you developing their 'friendship' thusfar. Can't wait to see more.^_^
Vaala Marsaille 2004-05-20 . chapter 6
I like the story so far! I can't wait till Magus gets involved! I can smell the upcoming fight!
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