Nice story keep it up

You've got Gil down pretty well ^_^ Mr. Emigma, as I call him.

But the only thing is *eyes get manical gleam* There are still OBVIOUSLY many more chapters to go and you last updated

*scrolls up*

TWO MONTHS AND A _*YEAR*_ AGO?!?!!?

*clutches heart, and makes odd choking noises. Soon she falls to the ground*

~*~Sceen Change!~*~

Gil: What has me wondering is where the hell is this story taking place? Or when? Obviously the people are used to demons, elves, and faeries, even though demons are mostly evil, and elves and faeries are nearly extinct. Dead demons are alive, and the Demon Lord and Dragon Lord can play chess without trying to kill one another . . . .

Bierrez: *shrugs* Never heard of the Realm of Eternal Darkness before . . . Though it is good to breathe air again *streaches arms above his head and sighs happily*

Gil: *stony stare*

Bierrez: And I wonder what Sable's past is. Not much of a traumic past in the books . . . and I wonder about you too. Did you really kill Fiji in this version? And Raamangarus . . . Hey are you really gay? *looks up*

Gil: *stony stare*

Bierrez: That's creepy, you know that?

*goes into Hyperactive Fangirl Mode*

OHMIGAWD GIL! XD He's not dead! He's well off! He's a phycitrist! He's famous! He's not dead! He's high ranking in the army! He's not dead! He's mysterious! He's getting along with Nadil! He's extremly hot! HE'S NOT DEAD! *squeals until her lungs pop*

Bierrez: (._.) . . . I wouldn't be you for all the chocolate in Switzerland.

*holds up sings like the Dragons do*

"This story is awesome!:"
"I really hope Rath"
"doesn't go too evil . . . ."

"I hope to see"
"More of Gil!"

*goes fangirl again*

Bierrez: That sounded VERY perverted . . . .

Please write more! I want to find out what happens next T-T I pronounce Nadil's name NAY-dle but sometimes I call him George just for the heck of it xD

HEE HEE HEE~ i love this story *heart*

*giggles madly*
If you translate Nadil's name into elvish, it means either "is a lover" or "is a head". XD
...*coughs* Sorry, just had to share. ^^;
Oh, wow, you've got the plot back to being mentioned!
Quite groovy.
Update soon!!
Ally

Luv it!^-^ poor ZomaI-I! finish the next chapter soon cuz i'm bored.nothin' to do,but I like the story^-^!

Heehee, I liked this chapter. My story (Imprisoned) is Rath/Cesia, Nadil/Cesia, although it's angst/romance, and I'm trying very hard to keep them all in character. (Nadil is CREEPY normal. Very creepy.)
And I pronounce it "Neigh-dil" although that reminds me of horses that I wouldn't associate with Nadil, but whatever. "NAY-dil" I think is how I would say it, oh well.
Groovy chapter, I liked how you did Rath, cute. Cesia is hard to do though. But I like her, she's my favorite female character in DK. My friends even call me Cesia, because I'm so much like her. (it's quite weird, really, but I love her anyway) I thought Cesia didn't like Delte? (to be honest, I don't really care for her much either, but she's livable.)
On the pronounciation thingys...Rath is 'Wrath" correct? And Cesia? How do you pronounce her name? SAY-sha? (that's how I do) or something else (Kay-see-a?) oh well.
This review seems quite long. Well, I am enjoying this story, unusual and strange as it is (usual and strange are MONDO complements, by the way...)

Waiting for the next instalment!

Lady Dragonnaine
tearsbehindthemask@hotmail.com

Nadil= Bob? eek. i think Nadil's fine. I mean, just being a good guy and not killing Lykouleon is OOC major. So taking it off from there is fine. i love Sabel> I have no idea if he's OOC but oh well> and Gil? He's my FAVE!*coos his name and loves him so much* O.o anyway, i think he's fine> Maybe talks to much... and not cheeky enough when he talks, but really he's a hard character. Anyway, good jobm I can't wait for your next update! ! YAY!

oh, yea it's 'NAH-dle' my friend told me. weird huh? well, update! BYEZ!

Aw! *squeezes Zoma* So cwot! ^_^ I can't stand it!

Eh, no offense, but just about everyone besides Cesia, Rath, the DKnights, and Zoma are OOC o.O;;

As for pronounciation...*tries out all the suggested*
NAH-dle: sounds like someone drowning
Nah-DIL: how I pronouce it
NEIGH-dle: how you pronounce the Latin word for newborne
Neigh-DIL: An oddly pronounced Latin word for newborne
Nah-DEAL: sounds out an insect call
Bob: I prefer George

Gababa...XD

*does a dance* TANKEE FOR UPDATING! Maybe you should mention that nice Cesia and Nadil picture you did that is up in your deviantart gallery ^-~

Hey, Angel-Cesia... That was GREAT! I can't wait for the next chapie! ^.^V

Yeah... I noticed that they SCREWED Sabel and Galaba's names. I've noticed that if there's an R in a Japanese name, it's truned into an L, and vice-versa. (Lim Kanna, Ruwalk, Garaba... XP) Though I'm used to Ruwalk... Anyway! I liked this chapter! Finally they get to hopefully find out about Sabels true nature!! (weird music plays) XD

AW!
POOR SABEL! I wuv him! He's awesome! what did happen to him? I'm hoping you'll tell that sometime in a highly dramaic fashion. Like this chapter. Poor BABY! WA! And I lvoe everyone here. Yupyup. YAY! update soon! I love your stories! I wish you'd update alternate dimension... although true, after 19 chapters you kinda get sick of it. I did too... and I'm at 19 chapters too... funny. Anyway, good luck becoming Unrestricted. lol.