Ravn MTM 2005-09-17 . chapter 6ok i have one BIG question whitch one of Tai's Last names are the JApanese one? and which one is american? |
yasmine 2005-01-18 . chapter 6 WOW Michi yay!Keep it on! |
Psyclone 2004-12-16 . chapter 6HAHAHAHAHA that was funny i vhope you write some more i want to see what happens next |
Aylen-BrownEyez 2004-10-12 . chapter 6Hey this is a really good fic. |
Vigatus 2004-10-07 . chapter 6funny story ha ha. Me like whole bunches |
ani 2004-08-02 . chapter 6 I heard you say matt are going to die.right?please don't.i want michi and soratoat this of the fic! so ,i beg u! |
DarkMetalAngel of Destruction 2004-07-31 . chapter 6yay michi. keep it as michi b/c i luv that idea. update soon. l8r |
MTiyamoto 2004-07-31 . chapter 6Awe *sniffles* it was wonderful! Keep it going ok? I'll try and update some of my stories, but I think I'm gonna turn into a one-shot writer... Anywise! Keep going on this story, I'm interested now :3 See yah! |
MTiyamoto 2004-06-21 . chapter 5Raining...reminds me of something worse is coming up...anyhoot! HURRY! |
Prozacfairy 2004-06-07 . chapter 5A little OOC's a bit of an understatement isn't it? ^_^ Just kidding, i don't think Mimi would be that mean really tho.
Keep it up, i'm interested now. where are Tk and Kari in this anyway? |
Master of Destruction 2004-06-02 . chapter 4The 'plan' right? It was the 'plan' that made Matt do that, right? I'm just wondering, 'cuz why else would he? And PLEASE make it Sorato and Michi! I don't know why, but I LIKE Michi! ^_^; Not to mention the fact that I LOVE Sorato. (Although Yakari is my second favorite...)
In reality this fic would work really well if it was Sorato and Michi. I kinda like the story (besides the fact that you want to kill Matt), so do update and have Matt and Sora get back together! ^_^ Keep up the interesting writing! |
Aino Yuy 2004-05-27 . chapter 4i'm going to appear like a ** here, i'm very aware of that, but so b it if it's going to get my point across.
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this chap sucked. no, not because it was a Mimato chap, but because u completely disregard the fact that Yamato would never do that, especially to Sora. he's got a girlfriend, hun. at least that’s how u made it come across in the previous chaps. he's not a flirt. Mimi, **, screw the pink freak cuz seriously, she's annoying. (yeah, that's right "!".) but god, sure u can hate him but that doesn't ** mean u can make him do horrible things to Sora. excuse my langue, btw. in almost all my future Digimon fics i'm gonna bash Mimi right n left. but i'm not gonna make her OOC. how bout trying that in ur story?
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so, for the future, u can hate Yamato but don't ** make him OOC. don't make him do dumb **, especially when he's dating Sora (n clearly loves her in the anime n manga.) also, definitely work on ur chap lengths.
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well, that's all i got to say for now. sure, think of this as a flame. but i c it as constructive criticism. at least i gave reasons why it sucked, unlike "!" who reviewed my fics only to say it sucked cuz i hate Mimi.
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Let's burn Sora! 2004-05-27 . chapter 4 omg! kill Sora! Make her really depressed and jump in front of a car and she dies! and then Mimi could choose Yamato or Tai. CUZ SORA A REAL B!+ |
! 2004-05-27 . chapter 2 OMG IT BETTER BE MIMATO TAIORA! OTHER THEN THAT IT'S GREAT! |
Genna 2004-05-27 . chapter 4 Taiora and Mimato please! |