sry i had 2 wait till the end to review...but i had nothing to say. it was g8!

well, it seems very soap oprah-ish. but its a great story, and you really brought it to life,plus the story kept moving so it kept me reading.

two thumbs up :)

~*Ok, finally got a username. (formally Ally L) This is the first fanfic I actually finished, simply because im really busy and dont spend that much time on the computer. But this story suckes you in and wont let go. I bookmarked it to read when I had the time and now im done. (twirls around) lol. I really wouldn't call it fanfic since its an original story, and as I said before, I think it could be published. Im not going to lie, its going to need a lot of work with editors, etc. BUT I can easily see it gaining a strong cult (if not bestselling) following, along with such authours as francessca lia block (I was a teenage fairy) and who ever wrote A faerie story. There's a lot of room in that market right now, and I would definetly get a good agent to submit your work. :-) But if you decide not to publish it, I 2 would love a sequel! *~

I can't believe it's over. That was awesome. I hope you write a sequel or something! Haha I sound like a random fangirl. Anyways. Seriously, write a follow-up story this one was seriously awesome.

Love this chapter!(7) How everything connects, is awesome! Its funny because I DO know guys like Dakota lol. U really should get this published, I would works a bit more on the first chapter, it dosn't seen to flow as nicely as the others.

Wow. I can't believe you have so few reviews for such an awesome story. Seriously. And 32 chapters long. Haha, I doubt I could stay inspired for a story longer than 10 chapters. Awesometastic. (Ha. Sorry. That's one of my friends' words he made up and it kinda stuck...)

I'm glad that Shylie and Dakota hooked up. And Tavern's past was a comeplete turn-around 4 me. I can't wait to read more.

This the most twisted story I've ever read! Please continue it is REALLY getting good!

Hi. Did you know that Tia and Tamera(or is it Tamara?) Are the names of those twins in that old TV show Sister, Sister? Just thought i'd let you know. Unless, of course, you know already.

I like your story. I'ts different. Keep updating, and if you get a chance to read my fanfic, Alexandrite, could you please review?

o my gosh! this is probably one of the best books i've ever read.. i love it so much! fairies are like, the coolest things in the world and you're doing a sweet job with all the characters and stuff. love it to death,update soon

**KYRA**

yeah rach-another review-you know i love it-now publish it!

Rach- Already read this last time i slept over at 1:30 am but for those who haven't--this story rocks. I also think you should publish it rach! have fun and see you tonight