OMG!i loved the ending..it took my breath away!i was in suspense the whole time!!I LOVED THE STORY!Keep writing!

Aw that was SO the saddest thing I have ever read! It totally made me cry! Wow, this was SO good!

Dudde...that was utterly and truly amazing. It *almost* made me cry!! It was so sad and sweet all at the same time...lol--aww!! That was great. Keep writing! Damn that was good...
-Nicole

:( That made me so sad, but it rocked. Good job!

Wow...Um..Wow. (Lol. If you haven't noticed already I'm kinda...well...speachless)

aw

Kool story. I loved it.

Aw, very cute and great way of doing it in first person. Loved that it was JAy, he is under appreciated. I liked the whole seeting off everything and the sky was a great element. Very nicely done

that is such a sad story, but its really, really, good. I think you could probably get it published in a magazine. . . try it!