This thing almost bore me to death. The grammar is better than what I expected and the narrative is not bad. I loathe self inserts though, but at least this one is actually readable (but extremely boring for me) and not a huge pile of steaming acid shit like other self inserts are.

I like this story. I would like the names for the stories you mentioned as acronyms. I hope you continue this story. You did good development and great chapter lengths.

NIce story update, although I can barely wait for those tanks to get smashed, I can just see kyle looking up after he finish's chucking a sachel bomb through the portal, and see's a tank flipping end over end off in the distance with little black specks run all over it. The gobsmaked look would be holarious.

Looking forward to chapter six when you are ready to post it. I had been wondering about the other members of the NWC and was happy to see some of them pop up in the last chapter. With the way most of them have been different it makes me think about what Happi is like in this world. He and Pantyhose may be normal here or so so worse. It would be funny if Kyle found some of Ranma's and the Tendo's enemies to direct their way. But, this Ranma would likely just kill them, to bad would be funny to see Chardin after them.

then I just have to wonder... who are they?

Very interesting story so far. I am usually hesitant to read a SIS, but I decided to give it a read and found myself drawn in. The characters are different to very different from cannon, leaving me unsure of what they will do at times. This is a good thing as I find a lot of cannon stories to be boring, as they do little different. Looking forward to reading the other chapters you have written so far and then having to wait for future chapters to come out.

Sweet now I can barely wait for the next update!

Wow...
After all that time, you finally updated. Even though, I already read the chapter, it's still hard to wrap my mind around it. Nonetheless, I'm quite content.
Well, who would have expected the story to still be alive? Hence, it's a great surprise and again, it was fun to read.

I like, how you incorporate humor with action and do a rather fine job at it. Especially the whole "Let's take the identities for a quick ride through insanity"-idea puts the story in a dark light and adds a new twist to it. Akane and the whole Tendo-gang being thugs and well... Yakuza, kind of. On the other hand, Ryoga being a self-controlled and self-confident fighter and studying alongside Ukyo and Kyle under the watchfull eye of Herb... that's just too crazy... and interesting.

Therefore, I'll stay tuned until the next chapter which hopefully won't take as much time to be completed as this one.

See you,

Deepdream

Well, I have to say this is one of the best fics I've ever read, but it appears it's not going to update anytime soon, unfortunately. Or perhaps it will as you stated you wanted to change.

Well, your fanfiction will always have a place in my mind as the cream of the crop. Or...king of the hill?

Whatever, good luck, and hopefully I'll remember to review(comment) on chance of a millennium.

Buh-bye

I'm really liking this, normally I don't like fics that rewrite the characters but this is fun and the rewrite feel like it was done more for the story than to bash.

Thanks for sharing.

Merely wanted to say that I sincerely enjoy your writing style, and I find your story intensly creative. It puts a whole new angle on the Ranma 1/2 manga, and I truly enjoy the difference. As well as the fact that it doesn't have over dramatized pregnancies and severly emo moments. I think it's a quaint step up from most writers. I look forward to your next update, and hope that it comes soon.

~Azriel

This is excellent. I think we'll find that the diversion point is going to be how Genma and Soun got rid of their old master. They called in the Yakuza and were slowly corrupted by them.

Excellent work. Quite a change from canon and quite a welcome one at that!

Excellent work. I really like how this is going.

I am impressed!

This is one of the best SIs I have seen.