It's a great story
Congrats ;)

great story! i liked how dawson and joey got 2gether but pacy was ok with everything

Thats great. I love it.

~*~Karah~*~

hey ash!
i rly did like you're story! it was so sweet and i had a movie going in my head about what was happening through each scecne and evrthing! i loved it!
jo

Aw, this such a sweet story! I really like it! Is it going to be a one chap story, or is there more??!
Either way you're doing a brilliant job.
Just one thing to watch, don't know wether you know this or its just a mistake. "Were" has no ' in. So in, "Things we're perfect" it should be "Things were perfect". The way you're typing it "we're" means we are. Just thought I'd let you know. Don't shoot me! *cowers away from computer screen*
Love the story.
Cevec