As you probably know, I'm no big fan of romance. ^^ BUT I did enjoy the story. 'Omoniki'? Were you by any chance refering to Okononomiyaki? There's one thing to remember about Japanese words, more often than not they are spelled the way they sound. See ya soon.
-Jamie

Hello again! Nice...extremly short, but pretty good. Maybe you should consider lengthening your chapters though, even for introductory chapters? It tends to attract more people's attention. Aw, cuckhold! One of the many advantages of studying shakespeare in English...And I was pleasantly surprised to see 'baka.' Hallie says that quite often, at last someone has picked up on it! Sadly, I can no longer use it as an insult towards my sister, because, alas, she has finally managed to learn what it MEANS. Oh well. See you at school!
-Jamie

Cute. Could be better if you put a little more effort into the set up and plot progression. Ranma should be more surprised at the way things are going. Maybe a bit suspicious, even? Bottom line, it's a cute concept and if you worked a little harder at it, it could be a great, fluffy fic!

Eyes... bleeding...
Just kidding. Anyway, spelling and grammer is way off, might want to correct it and repost then, it's pretty jarring.
Now, I'm an Akane hater, I admit it, (matter of fact, I revel in it.) But this Akane has me more leary than normal. She's way too 'sweetness and light.' Could have come about because of the wish, but wouldn't Ranma notice? Could work though. And hey! It's your fic, write whatever the hell you want, that's the bonus of being an author.
I do like that you removed Shampoo from the picture without her being portrayed in a bad light. That's rarely done. Although I always let out a sigh of discontentment when Ryoga dosen't get ground into paste.
Either take my comments to heart, or don't. Either way, write on.

Spelling on Cologne's name's way off.