hey that was awsome! i loved it! but could you possibly double check your typing.Your fingers have more then likly hit two keys at once so yeah...i do the same thing, really annoying when you read over your own story and find out how weird some words are... like "uchija" or Itaschi" weird...any who i really hope you update soon. it's an awsome story. love the adorable version of itachi! so cute! though i'd hate to see what Sasuke does to him...bye bye!

Not bad! Not bad at all!! I LOVE Itachi, I don't care if he's evil!! ^_^

But one question... WHERE THE HELL IS SASUKE DURING ALL THIS? He was in the beginning but you never mentioned him again.

LOL!! GREAT FANFIC SO FAR!! lol plz continue ^-^

Very interesting plot...you have to continue this, you hear? That's the problem with most good stories on this site...they just die off... :(

Seems you haven't updated for a while, but if you ever do...be sure I'll read it, cuz this fic rocks! *adds to favorite stories*

more more more!

very interesting... I wonder where you're going to take this

this is interesting...Itachi...I wonder what happen if Sesuke see him? Will he kill him...even wehn he is 'dead'?? After memory define a person...also I wonder if you can slightly justify Itachi action for killing his family...maybe treson??

If you want more reviews, login, go to 'settings' and uncheck 'don't alow anonimous reviews' That was my problem with my first story. It only got six. So, good idea, pretty good nariration. Even pretty good grammar. But!
-Go back and spell check everything.
-don't mix numbers and letters and chat-talk. Don't use 'b4' or 'U' instead of 'you'.
-You're writing a story, not an anime-script.
-When a different person talks, it's a new paragraph.
-Capitalize names, and spell them out properly. This is important.
-Use apostrophies in the right places.
-Use commas in the right places.
This could be a very good story, otherwise. You have a nice style.

hehe gotta love Kono Corps. They can make almost everyone cheer up!

Am I the only one reveiwing? It's really good!

Ooh I realyl like this. I wonder what will happen. He's so inocent now.

Hm.. I gues he can't fight.

hehe.. hmm can itachi still fight?