*Sigh* I always seem to manage to pick the brilliant fics that're on hiatus to read...I hope you're able to complete this someday, since it's truly among the best I've read in the Witch Hunter Robin fandom.

Ah, I just found this story, and am totally glad I did. I absolutely love it. Your characterizations are great, and I'm terribly intrigued by what's going on with STN-J's new Hunter. And it's nice to get a POV from so many different characters, especially when you write them so well. I hope you continue this!

Ooh, this is getting good! Is that Amon and Robin's kid from the future or something?

Ridiculously well written. I've been reading WHR fanfics for the past week, and I have been seriously dissapointed. If there aren't tons of grammar and spelling mistakes or OOC in the stories, there's a serious lack of plot, flow, structure, or mood. Where so many others have failed, you have succeeded in maintaining the essence of the characters as well as keeping the story fresh with twists, foreshadowing, and new perspectives.

*Please don't stop and continue with this fanfiction!*

(PS don't be too worried about regular updates. It's much more important to carefully plan out the plot. The fans will much more appreciate a well written story than regular updates.)

Good luck!

Hey Dex! (That should narrow down who I am, even if the name didn't, heh).

Interesting story, one that actually humanizes Amon and Micheal both. Jabez...seems much like Garrett. Unfortunately, I cannot offer a full explanation - one must play all of Thief and Thief 2 to truly grasp what I mean. But it's not a bad thing. Looking forward to the next chapter now.

WOW you are the best writer i have ever seen on this website. I mean it. PLEASE continue, this is the best witch hunter robin story ever - Nicola

I, too, hope that the next update comes sooner! I have only started reading this fic, but I am intrigued by the twists so far, and curious to see where they are leading. You have introduced quite a few plot turns and I'm looking forward to seeing how they all come together ... so, yeah, update SOON!

I'm not sure what to think of the bizarre blonde-turned-blackie (I didn't know the real term so I made one up) who calls himself Jabez. And I'm confused. Extremely confused. I was trying to picture Amon blonde, and it didn't work. I liked Nagira's appearance (brief and un-lighthearted as it was). Can't wait for more brilliance!

I'm not sure what to think of the bizarre blonde-turned-blackie (I didn't know the real term so I made one up) who calls himself Jabez. And I'm confused. Extremely confused. I was trying to picture Amon blonde, and it didn't work. I liked Nagira's appearance (brief and un-lighthearted as it was). Can't wait for more brilliance!

I assumed that Jabez is Amon/Robin's kid (There's my overly eager inner Amon/Robin freak. *sigh*). But I realized as I was reading, he could be part of a SUPER EVIL PLOT (and not their kid at all! gasp! (anyway, how would that have been possible? Mr. Jabez dude is an adult!) *sigh*.)! (and so now I'm having an unholy freakout and I can't think straight and it's all your fault. grr. I can't wait to read more!

This is great! I love Amon's brain's little side comments. Poor Amon! And you've greatly expanded my vocabulary. Sorry, I'll be quiet in a second. Just one last stupid comment. In a way, Jabez reminds me of Harry Potter. He's exactly like his father in every way, except for the eyes. The eyes are his mother's (and green eyes, too!).

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Heh, update!

I still don't like Jabez.

But, this chapter doesn't have the same feel as your other ones. O.o;; I don't really know how to explain it...maybe the word choice? Dunno. Or maybe it was Mika and Karasuma...I'm really not sure. Not saying that this chapter was bad, because it definitely wasn't (because when I keep going "whee new chapter" the writing's...you know, hee), but it felt different. Eh, probably because I haven't read your fic in ages.

I be shutting up my rambling now. Yes. ^^;;

Update soon! :D

Yikes. Jabez fully creeps me out, man. ^^;

I love how we spend some time in Mika's POV in this fic. She's such an underdeveloped character in the series, such raw potential, particularly where her relationship with Nagira is concerned; and you're doing a great job of allowing us to spend time in her head. ^^

The interaction between Kobari and Michael was interesting, too. Jabberwocky, hm? XD

And lastly, you're doing a splendid job with Amon and Robin. The way you portray them makes me all soft and squishy inside. ^^; *googly eyes*

Please don't wait as long to update the next chapter...I can't wait for you to continue to develop the plot, and I'm really REALLY curious now about Jabez. ^^ Yay!

Good chapter, great suspense! And who the hell is Jabez REALLY?? Hope you get to update soon!!