Um... wow... like... wow... THAT WAS FUNNY AS HELL MAN!
^u^
This is my first time in this page so...
Your story just inspired me... In fact...
I'm gonna write one VERY SOON!

Maybe u should just do max on sugar high as movie characters i mean u did get the insperations from pirates of the carabian and x-men and all so u could do movies like mr and ms smith or somthin like that cause i think ur best at that and also i love kai and hil together! UPDATE SON!

I LOVED IT I LOVE IT WHEN MAX TAKES HILARY AND KAI HAS TO SAVE HER!

lmao i luv it! hope you get more inspiration for this ^.^

wow, this is so funny hehe

Haha!
Cool! Continue it soon!

ROTFL seriously funny. Sounds just like Maxie.

AW MAX DRESSING UP AS KAI TO GET hilARy is hilarious! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!

max:*goes up to hilary* Hilary -

kai:*glare at max*

max: **...*walks away*

you should have him on suger high again and make him keep going after hilary an d make kai keep fighting and rescuing her because this is tottally hilarious and comin from me tha means ple
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ease!peace up A town down!

i thought i was jacked up but it was still good rock on

HAHAHAHAHAA! Man max is crazy when on a sugar high! I loved it and hop you update soon.

I love it! Can you make anohter chappie? *puppy eyes* pwease?

I also liked it when Max copied Tyson! ^^ But I hate Kai/Hilary.

*laughing my head up* THIS IS SO FUNNY! I LOVED IT WHEN MAX COPIED RAY! Ugh, but I JUST HATE Kai/Hilary! THAT COUPLE SICKENS ME! I'D RATHER WATCH BARNEY!

LOL! I love it so! Pirates are so awsome. PLZ UPDATE or ya shall walk thi plank! Plus I'm adding this to my faves