Yep me agin that was so cool!

Nicely job bringing out the theme that Frodo feels he failed. Tolkien said the same in his letters.

"I did not resist it. If Sam had not been there, I would have given in to the seduction much earlier. Sam was the only one who has kept me sane. If I might call my state of mind in those dark days sane at all. I was not myself anymore. And believe me, I lost a part of myself somewhere on the Quest."

Wonderful.

"Hope must never fade."

That's so much like Aragorn. Your style is very good!

I like this story alot. You have a way with words. Keep on making more stories. Please?

A bittersweet vignette! With just that ironic feeling at the end: "Hope must never fade." A beautiful ending line. Nice job!
~Leia

Poor Frodo! :-(
It's nice to see that the characters are true to their book selves and I thought this was a great chapter, even if it is a bit sad.

aww.. poor Frodo. this is written well, and i like how Aragorn, though he is a Healer and the King, he cannot help Frodo. i like, "Frodo‘s eyes more often focused on things Aragorn could not follow", which brings it all home that Frodo cannot stay in Middle-Earth, that meaning has passed beyond the circles of the world for him