please update it is so good

Oo! The temple of light! What's going to happen next?! Please update soon! ^_^

-Neosun7

Wow...Your story brings Zelda's character to life, since the game doesn't really dwell much on her except as the distant princess who needs to be rescued all the time. ^^
Rebecca: Yeah! Your description's great--as always! Oh, and my little authoress needs to apologize for this late review...
Me: Um...?
Rebecca: *glares* I told you to apologize!
Me: *shudders* OK, OK...but I was on a trip without a computer... I couldn't read this chapter even if I had wanted to--
Rebecca: Stop with the lame excuses and apologize already! I bet Houyoku worked really ** this chapter!
Me: Meep...yes, ma'am... Ahem...sorry for this really late review...
Rebecca: ^_^ *pats me on the head* Good little authoress.
Me: @_@ Sure...but anyways... Keep Writing (and drawing, too)!

Chapter! ^_^ Fun chapter!! Rauru!! *is scared of Rauru* He's... scary... and plump... and old... and bald... T_T And he talks a lot. *nods* But that's beside the point. Magic!! I like magic... *nods again* Ahaha! I'm rambling now... -_-' Oh boy... Wah... Redead... *sniff* I hate Redeads, Gibdos, Wallmasters, Floormasters, Dead Hands, Poes, and just about any monster that you can find in the Shadow Temple and Spirit Temple. *nods* They're scary... They're not supposed to be walking around! It's not right! T_T Y'know... It's fun to freeze all the Redead in the Castle Town and then stand in the exit/entrance, wait for them to unfreeze and then throw a bomb! And watch them turn around slowly and walk toward the disturbance. *nods* I'm weird... *nods* And rambling... again... T_T Well... update soon! ^_^

nice chapter!*whistles admirably*loved it!

M, this is interesting. Update soon!

Your writing has again and again amazed me with its depth and clarity. Please continue this story, I'm enjoying it immensely (partly because I'm a big LoZelda fanatic).

*gasp* My other review didn't appear...T_T Oh well... I haven't played Zelda in a long time, but now it's coming back to me, having read this story! You're SO good at description!! ^_^ Hehehe...I want to draw Zelda now...^^; Keep Writing!

This story only gets better! It is beautifully written and I eagerly await the next chapter!

-Neosun7

Cuteness! I think even though i'm a zelinker, that this is a pretty cool story. kiehs/zelda! I just hope link dosn't fall for anyone...

Cuteness! I think even though i'm a zelinker, that this is a pretty cool story. kiehs/zelda! I just hope link dosn't fall for anyone...

not bad...actually i like it. i am also a zelinker but that is of little importance. i think this is a good beginning and you should continue it.you have my blessings with the following chapters and i will continue to review.
~kat ^-^

*smiles* I have you on Author Alert! ^^ So of course I'll read and review all your stuff! ^_^ *backs away nervously* Umm... hehehe... I'm er... working on the next chapter of my Zelda ficcy... ehehe... yeah... anyway...

Wowie! So much nice description! ^^ *starry-eyed* Doggy!! ^_^ The Sheikah are cool... *nods* They sorta remind me of Selkies except for the thief part... *nods some more* Or actually... the Selkies remind me of the Sheikah 'cause the Sheikah came first... *nods again* But don't mind me and my twisted logic... update soon!!

Very awesome. Personally, I like Zelda/Link pairings, but since you said you won't pair them with original characters, I will continue to read and review. I like how you describe the scenes.

Hey, this is great! You seriously ought to continue this, it looks really cool. ^_^