This is so very good, I love it.

Well, hey hey. I gotta say, I definitely dig the tale. Though this "Lizzy Summers" intrigues me... ;D

Lizzy Summers? Oh well, cute this was. V cute. And kinda funny. I like Giles saying, "Ah, yes, of course, the Symbol of the Binders glowing in neon green on your chest should have been my first clue." Now that was funny. Nice work. Buh-bye!

Nice idea, but it would have been more effective if you didn't point out the intentional spelling error. Irony works better when you don't make it that obvious.